1、3 四级句子写作四级句子写作(B)四级写作中如何选词Compare the Following Sentences We should use different ways to get to know the society. We ought to make use of various methods to get to know the society. We are supposed to take advantage of diverse means to get to know the society. Adopt/employapproach选词的基本原则 尽量用四级范围内的积
2、极的,活跃的，常用的词或词组 。 尽量用表达最贴切,最生动,最有力的词或短语 。 尽量用最符合所写话题,所用文体的词或表达。Summary 文章无论长短都是由词汇构成的。如果掌握的词汇量不够，写出的文章就会词不达意，严重影响文章的表达。所以，要尽可能学好词汇，掌握词，词组和常用表达，打好写作基础。 四级考生在措词方面 存在的问题： 1 可供“调遣”的词汇量贫乏，用词大部分局限于中学词汇。Eg. Good points= benefits, advantages, merits, strong points.Problems, bad points= drawbacks, disadvantag
3、es, shortcomings, defects, weak points 2 表达相近意义时，常重复用一个词，用词单调。Eg. Good= helpful, useful, beneficial, favorable, advantageous, does good/harm to, benefit.策略 1 调动大学期间学过的更生动，更丰富的词汇表达意思。Eg. Cause, lead to, result in, bring about, bring on, give rise/birth to Result from, due to, attribute to, owing to,
4、as a result of 2 用具体，生动，有针对性的词语。Eg. Use, make use of, make (good, effective, wide, wise, full) use of sth, take (full) advantage of 3 文中如需要多次表达同一词义时，以原词，同义词，近义词等避免重复使用同一词。Eg. Adapt to, adjust, makefit, get/be used to, be accustomed to 四级写作中如何造句英语句子的基本类型（1） 简单句：一个主语（或并列主语）和一个谓语动词（或并列谓语动词）或表语。表达简单思想，用
5、词较少。 Eg. College students should get to know the world outside the campus.Eg. To Study abroad is beneficial to young people in many different aspects.Eg. Information assumes an important part in our life and work.Eg. What we learn today in school can lay a solid foundation for our future career. 英语句
6、子的基本类型（2） 并列句：用并列连词或分号连接两个或以上简单句。各个简单句是并列关系。Eg. Be honest, or/otherwise you will never learn anything. （Or 表选择关系）Eg. We should not just sit here complaining, for it would be of no use. （For 表因果关系）It is of no use sitting here complainingEg. As the gap between the rich and the poor becomes wider and w
7、ider,Some people have no money to spend, while others have nothing to spend money on. （While 表对比关系） 常见的并列连词 And, not onlybut also, then But While For Eitheror, neithernor, or, or else, nor英语句子的基本类型（3） 复合句： 定语从句，主语从句等常用 Eg. Those who like fast food are not very likely to get enough nutrition from it.
8、 Eg. Though study methods may differ/vary from person to person, the following suggestions might be beneficial to all. Eg. It is well-known/generally widely/commonly believed/ that language is the most common means of communication.从句的种类(1) 名词性从句：主，表，宾，同位语从句(noun clauses) Eg. Many people hold the op
9、inion that country life is inferior/superior to city life. Eg. I think that the positive aspects of sports far outweigh the negative ones. Eg. It is generally recognized that diligence is a key factor to success. Eg. My view towards opportunity is that everybody stands a chance of succeeding in his
10、work and life as long as he is determined to/make up ones mind to work hard for his goals.从句的种类(2)定语从句 In recent years/Nowadays/At present/currently, more and more people have become aware of the important role that information plays in our modern life. The reasons why studying abroad has become mor
11、e and more popular lie in the following aspects./ be as follows It is the high time that the government take effective measures to fight against crime.从句的种类(3)状语从句 If you practice doing something regularly, chances are that you will become skillful in it. Although womens liberation movement has achi
12、eved some success, there is still a long way to go/ towards real equality.There is still some room to impove Ever since China adopted the policy of reform and opening (to the outside world), great changes have taken place in the country.其它句子在写作中的运用 疑问句Eg. Which way is the best to get to know the soc
13、iety, through listening to the radio, watching TV, reading the newspapers, or taking part in social activities?Eg. Have you ever taken a part-time job? Do you think it is a good practice for college students to do temporary jobs in their free time?Other Examples Now that we have realized the importa
14、nce of choosing a right career, what factors should we take into account when we are planning our career and making our decisions? Well, read on and you will find the answer. How can we deal with the problem of waste disposal? My proposals are as follows. Why do so many students in our country long
15、for studying abroad? The reasons lie in the following aspects. 反问句Eg. Now that we have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice?Eg. Dont you agree with my idea that a test of oral English be included in the CET-4 and 6? Eg. Dont you think that it is high time that everybody
16、joined in the effort to protect our environment and save the earth? 强调句It is surfing on internet constantly that does harm to childrens health.It is good health that enables a person to go all out in his career and accomplish great success. It is education that makes a person wise.It is through regu
17、lar practice that a English learner gets to know the language well. 感叹句How time flies!How things have changed!How wonderful it is to have computer do the heavy work for man!What an advantageous thing it is to study abroad!Without learning english, we cant speak english, nor can we write in English句型
18、多样 简单句，并列句和复合句交替使用，灵活使用各种句子结构如：倒装句，省略句。强调句，非谓语动词，疑问句，祈使句和感叹句等。 若要写好作文，要写好句子，首先要掌握句子结构和句式变化及句子类型，可通过对泛读课文经典句子的背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。 要善于模仿。Imitation is a good way to learn.短文写作中句型变换技巧一 平行结构的运用主题句： Video games are a kind of entertainment.利用平行结构拓展为：They bring pleasures to youngsters, train them to respond qu
19、ickly and stimulate their imagination in electronics.二 句式灵活多变的运用Books are worth readingBooks telling people how to adapt themselves to the society are worth reading.Harry stood at the edge of the path, watching the cars running.三 改变句子开头少用与人有关的词性（名词或代词），多用状语，同位语，表语，短语修辞语及there be句式。It is a fact that
20、(the development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture.)四 长短句交叉长句中因为使用的定语，状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，比较精确，严密。写作时最好长短句交替使用。Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener. Green trees line the streets. A clean river winds through the city
21、, in which a lot of fishes abound. On the one side stand rows of willow(柳树) trees. On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkle with many yellow and red flowers.五 句子扩展方法的运用(1.)Tea Come to tea Come to tea with me Come to tea with me by the sea If you are free on weekends, come to green tea
22、with me by the sea, please. (2) TV is popular Nowadays, TV is popular in China Nowadays, TV is so popular in China that almost every family owns one The fact that (Nowadays TV is so popular in China that almost every family owns one) has caused a lot of problems (3) Li Ming is playing football. Li M
23、ing, the boy in white football clothes and red hat, is playing football. Its a fine June day, Li Ming, the boy in white football clothes and red hat, is playing football with his classmates. Its a fine June day, Li Ming, the boy in white football clothes and red hat, is playing football with his cla
24、ssmates, with sweat dropping down from his face.写作中常见的句式错误一 一致性1 Born in a small village over forty years ago, he became a scientist laterHe is born in a small village over forty years ago, and later he became a scientist.2. The boy is too young. The boy is too young to take care of himself.3. Altho
25、ugh tired and exhausted, the work was finished on time. Although tired and exhausted, he finished the work on time.4. 中途改变主语： Birds have a special protective device, the approach of cold weather can be sensed, they fly south, and we know that winter is near. Birds have a special protective device, t
26、hey can sense the approach of cold weather, so when they fly south, we know that winter is near.5.修饰成分紧挨被修饰词 The Tower of London is now a tourist attraction, in which so many people lost their lives The Tower of London in which so many people lost their lives is now a tourist attraction二 语言的简洁1 The
27、school is very big in size.The school is very big.2. There was a man who stood there watching all this.A man stood there watching all this3. She is a girl who is 18 years old.She is an 18-year-old girl.3. In my opinion, I think it is certain that you will be recognized.I think you will certainly be
28、recognized.三 主谓一致1 My uncle is one of those who do not believe that a knowledge of politics is useful in a business office.2. Jane as well as the rest has agreed to come ( with, as well as, except, in addition to, not)3. Every man and woman is treated in the same way. (every,eachand)4. The chairman
29、and general secretary was selected.5. Either I or you are wrong. Not only the students but also the teacher has doubts.6. Ten minutes is a long time for us to wait7. My family are all vegetarians/ My family never intends to has anything to do with business.四中式英语。1 Although he was seriously, but he c
30、ame to the meeting.2. He said he married in 1993 in shanghai.3. He has come back for two weeks. But I have no time to pay a visit.4. With the TV coming into our family, audience are more and more.5. I want to raise the level of my English.6. My body is healthy7. I think you are not right.8. We should not talk love for the sake of study9. Teenager smokers are becoming more and more.
