1、具备较强的语言 运用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧,凑完全达到了预期的写作目的,书面表达写作步骤：,审列串连查写,How to write,2011.高考辽宁卷假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业，你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很 感兴趣，请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要求：1、年龄；2、学习情况及英语水平；3、兴趣和特长；4、性格特点。注意：1、词数100 左右；2、可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3、开头语和结束语已为你写好。,step1审题,体裁 求职信人称 第一人称时态 一般现在时自我介绍；学习情况及要点 英语水平；兴趣与特长；性格特点5）半开放
2、式作文,Greeting,Dear Mr./Mrs./Ms/Sir/MadamParagraph1.Simply state your reasons for writingI am interestedin applying for the job I am writing to you with reference to.,Paragraph2.Explain why you are interested in the jobI would like to work for you because I am very interested in.I would also like to l
3、earn about I feel that isextremely importantParagraph3Write about your qualifications,practical skills and personal qualities I think I am a.person,For example,I have.I think I would be a good due to my experience.I also feel that I can as I have completed a course in I am fluent in spoken and writt
4、en In addition,I hold a certificate in.Formal endingI look forwardtohearingform you soon.Yours sincerely/Yours faithfully,Layout,Step2要点构思,that,Reasons for writing and reasons for interest（P1.-P2.）I learned from the newspaper that your company needs secretary,so Im writing to apply for in your compa
5、ny.非谓语表达Havinglearned from the newspaperthat your company needsa secretary,Im writing to apply forIm really interested in the position and feel like apply for it.强调句,It isinterest,makes me feel like applying for the position.,Qualifications,personal qualities and Practical skills.（P3）,要点1：Introduce
6、yourself.Im Li Hua and 18 years old.I will graduate from Xin xing foreign language school.用同位语自我介绍 定语从句Im Li Hua,a 18-year-old girl,whowill graduate from Xinxing foreign language school.用before句式表达It wont be long beforeI graduate from Xin xing Foreign Language School,.,要点2：学习情况及英语水平,I study very har
7、d and Im an excellent student in my school.Im good at English非谓语形式和定语从句升级句式,who has a good grasp ofwhohas agood knowledge of whomasterswho gets thehangofwho has a good command of,Studying very hard at school,掌握得好,I am one of the top student,who is very good at English.,要点3：兴趣与特长Computer/typing/commu
8、nication skills.Im good at computer,computer to type,I can make good use of and send e-mails.take advantage of do well in,I am fluent in spoken and written In addition,I hold a certificate in,要点4：性格特点useful vocabulary,hard-working,outgoing,patient,careful,generous,confident,creative,modest,neat adj.
9、灵巧的整洁的优雅的,easygoing intelligent,optimistic,enthusiastic,active,motivated adj.,有积极性的,ambitious有雄心,capable有能力的 cheerful,creative,reliableI am patient and outgoing,which makes me get along well with others.,用so that,句型,Soenthusiastic and reliable am IthatI become very popular with my classmates.,I am s
10、oenthusiastic and reliablethatI become very,popular with my classmates.,用倒装句型,Express your expectation politely.,1.I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance to work in your company.Its very kind of you to offer me a chance to workIts my honor to be a member of your if you give me a chance.
11、4.I shall beglad to call at your office if you desire an interview.5.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because.6.I sincerely hope that my application could be favorablyconsidered。I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted toyourcamp/company。I am sure that I can perfectly liv
12、e up to your expectations 9.Thank you in advance for your kind consideration10.If I am lucky enough to be admitted,III work hard and try tobe a good secretary.,Im looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua,Signing off,申请信格式模板：Dear Sir/Madam，I write this letter to apply for the position tha
13、t you have advertised in（报纸名 称）of（广告发布时间）I am from As a（n），I have been Besides，I won in If you consider me appropriate for the job,please call me at,Step3 串,step4,连句成篇。,衔接紧密，过渡自然。英语常见的过渡词语：表递进：besides,whats more,moreover,in addition,even,whats worse,to make matters worse.表列举：above all,first（of all）,
14、then,next,finally;on one hand,on the other hand;at the same time/meanwhilefor example,such as,like表原因：because of,due to,because,as,now that,since表结果：so,therefore,thus,as a result表并列：and,also,too,not only but also,as well as表转折：but,however,while，yet表总结：in conclusion,in a word,in short,generally speak
15、ing.表观点：in my opinion,personally,as far as Im concerned,to tell the truth表解释：that is to say,in other words,or,Step5查病错,检查修改，看要点是否齐全，句子顺序是否符合逻辑，句子之间是否连贯，句子结构是否正确，人称是否一 致。动词时态语态，单词拼写，标点符号等。Step6写全文字迹清晰，卷面整洁。字母大小匀称，单词间距适当。,深入探究：欣赏本班学生优秀作文，请学 生代表批注评讲。,课外延伸：,Interviewscene;B&B 公司负责人面试李华,Dear Sir/Madam,I
16、learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.The ad is really very appealing to me,so Im now writing to you inthe hope of filling in the job vacancy.I have just turned 18 this year,and will graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this coming July.Ive been doing pretty fine with my lessons,and a
