1、20% 参加社会实践1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友你的计划? （至少一个）？（请你补充）注意：（1）邮件应包含所有要点（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分注：社会实践 social practice activitiesDear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today._Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidThe students have their own plans about how to sp
2、end a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interest
3、s. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spe
4、nd a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and deve
5、lop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2假定你是David，来自美国，你的QQ好友Li Ming
6、想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David， Im writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. Im interested in it very much. Im going to do some this summer
7、vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with volunteering? If my parents dont allow me to do so, what should I do? Im looking forward t
8、o hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions._I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wi
9、shesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. A
10、lso, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.Its OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I cant balance my study and work. If your parents dont allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them u
11、nderstand you.这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：m glad，we can，Its OK to，If your parents dont allow you to.，you should，I hope等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工
12、作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3书面表达李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动，假定你是李华，请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日端午节，内容包括：1. 今年庆祝时间（6月18日）2. 节日由来：纪念（be in m
13、emory of）屈原3. 吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日1. 词数80100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头已写好，不计入总词数。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _.【答案】Dear fello
14、ws, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watc
15、h the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日端午节。People celebrate，People hold，We
16、can watch，We welcome to等句式的应用。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动，最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。优秀事迹
17、上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程未来梦想1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School._【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He like
18、s reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to
19、 be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustnt throw rubbish everywhere.亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number o
20、f，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。5书面表达 初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Ou
21、r school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。在校老师工作认真负责，充满爱心学生 （至少发挥两点）周末作业作业多舍弃爱好其它活动锻炼，电视愿望 （发挥一到两点）1所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here
22、 is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whet
23、her in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot o
24、f time doing our homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明
