1、写作英语六级写作套用句型高分作文标志1：四级120-150字;六级150180字;2、是否长短句交叉;3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable ap
2、proaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that
3、3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了
4、很大的提高。Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic mus
5、ic. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly替换verythrilling替换excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth.google替换searchan army of替换a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincide
6、nt with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popu
7、larity替换more and more popularCoincident with非常地道的词汇，表达“与一致”的意思，替换WithAdvancement替换developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter intoCurrent ( currently )替换nowAppeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals替换more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的For a sta
8、rt, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start替换To begin withWe can, freely,
9、 search用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换In addition / BesidesDeliver替换sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn p
10、ictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm toEmerging代替appeari
11、ng ( fading代替disappearing )Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garde
12、n has no weeds替换Every coin has two sidesComputers do play，do强调Positive替换important / good等A slice of替换a part ofUnfavorable替换badImpacts替换effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入语Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage )Facet替换aspect各位同学，上面的作文里有
13、这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢!以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替eg.An army of college s
14、tudents indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.注：
15、用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用most, if not all ,代替most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书
16、面语，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing8: shared代common9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.S
17、th is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly13.benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable .代替necessary,inevitable17.sth
18、appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in18.capture ones attention代替attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.22. There ar
19、e several reasons behind sth代替.reasons for sth23.desire代替want.24.pour attention into代替pay attention to25.bear in mind that代替remember26. enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)27. interaction代替communication28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example3
20、0. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible用于文章主题句1.不用说It goes without saying that子句= (It is) needless to say (that)子句= It is obvious that子句= Obviously, S. + V.例不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.2.是不可能的; 无法There is no Ving= There is no way of Ving.= There is
21、 no possibility of Ving.= It is impossible to V.= It is out of the question to V.= No one can V.= We cannot V.例不可否认的成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.3.我深信I am greatly convinced (that)子句= I am greatly assured (that)子句例我深信预防是于治疗。I am greatly
22、convinced that prevention is better than cure.4.在各种之中Among various kinds of , = Of all the , 例在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.5.是很容易证明的。It can be easily proved (that)子句例时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.6.无论如何强调都不为过
23、 cannot be overemphasized例交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.7.就我的看法;我认为In my opinion, = To my mind, .= As far as I am concerned, = I am of the opinion that子句例就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmfu
24、l to health.8.(A) 每个人都知道Everyone knows (that)子句(B) 就我所知As far as my knowledge is concerned, 例就我所知下列方法对我帮助很大。As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.9.毫无疑问地There is no doubt (that)子句例毫无疑问地近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious p
25、roblem among the youth of our country.10. 根据我个人经验According to my personal experience, = Based on my personal experience, 例根据我个人经验微笑已带给我许多好处。According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.11. 在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more t
26、han 例在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比我的英文老师张老师更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher.12. 在我的求学过程中我忘不了In the course of my schooling. I will never forget 例在我的求学过程中我忘不了学习英文所遭到的大困难。In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty
27、I encountered in learning English14. (A) 在这信息的年代扮演重要的角色。In the age of information and communication, plays an important role.(B) 在今日工业社会中是生命不可或缺的。In todays industrial society, is indispensable to life.例在这信息的年代计算机扮演非常重要的角色。In this age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely
28、important role.15. 在讨论一个人不得不承认。In dealing with , one cannot but admit (that)子句例在讨论未来的职业一个人不得不承认尽早决定未来的职业很重要。In dealing with ones future career, one cannot but admit that it is very important to decide ones future career as early as possible.16. 世上没有什么比更令我高兴。Nothing in the world can delight me so muc
29、h as 例世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast-food restaurants.17. 是必要的 It is necessary that S (should) V 是重要的 It is important/essential that S (should) V 是适当的 It is proper that S (should) V 是紧急的 It is urgent that S (should) V例我们当保持公共场所清洁是应当的。It i
30、s proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.18. 每当我听到我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear , I cannot but feel excited.每当我做 我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do , I cannot but feel sad.每当我想到我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of , I cannot but feel nervous.每当我遭遇我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with , I cannot but feel frightened.每当我看到 我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see , I cannot but feel surprised.例每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home,
