1、备考高考英语分类汇编 第八期E单元 短文改错新课标版E单元短文改错目录E单元短文改错 1E1 短文改错记叙文 1E2 短文改错应用文 11E3 短文改错议论文 14E4 短文改错说明文 14 E1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈六中高三上学期期末考试（201501）】：短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下
2、划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。Cheetahs(猎豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetahs amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to ca
3、tch up a meal thats as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none
4、 of them can match the speed of the cheetah.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. fastfastest in the world提示我们要用最高级。2.runningrun be able to 后用动词原形3.fastlyfast fast 既可以做形容词，也可以做副词，英语中无fastly。4.amazedamazing ed修饰人，-ing修饰物5.去掉best favorite=likebest，这里重复，去掉best。6. catch up后加上with catch up with 追上；赶上7.had has 短文整体
5、时态用一般现在时。8. asthan 句中出现faster比较级，故用than。9. aan excellent example元音发音前用an。10. isare several species是复数，故用there are。【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高三上学期第二次适应性测试（201501）word版】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除
6、：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates.
7、How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a c
8、age. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】期盼已久的寒假却因以往父母的过多干涉、过分担心而让我变得忐忑不安。我试图说服他们。 【答案解析】1. made makes 考查谓语动词的时态：表达自己现在的感受，故用一般现在时态2. at to 考查固定表达look forward to doing sth.渴望作某事3. movie movies 考查可数名词的单复数：several+可数名词的复数4.thebasketball with my classmates. 去掉the考查
9、零冠词的用法：球类运动前不加冠词5. What How 考查感叹词的用法：How + adj.+ a/an + n. +主语+谓语+ 6. different differently考查副词的用法：副词修饰动词作状语7. go to go 考查宾补动词的用法：want sb. to do sth8. Beside Besides 考查副词词义：besides此外9. keeping kept 考查非谓语动词的用法:keep作定语与被修饰词a bird构成逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词kept表被动10. him them 考查代词的指代：此处指代上文的my parents故用第三人称复数人称代
10、词宾格them【英语卷（解析）2015届浙江省杭州二中高三第二次月考（201412）】第三节：短文改错 （满分10分）下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. the Luckily I was c
11、ompletely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at am around 8 pm in Friday evening.on When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, that computers are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information can be stored in it. W
12、e can learn what is lately happened in the world on the Internet. In the past, people have to do lots of work that was very dangerous. Now, computers can do it otherwise. When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【
13、答案解析】1. for改成as 爸爸给我买了一台电脑作为生日礼物。2. in 去掉 去年last year in多余。3. that 去掉 As we all know,有逗号，是as引导的非限性定语从句，that多余。4. usefully改成useful get变得+形容词。5. it改成them 这里的代词指前面的computers，故用them。6. is改成has 强调对现在造成的影响和结果，用现在完成时。我们通过网络可以了解世界上最近发生的事情7. have改成 had 根据in the past，要用一般过去时。8. otherwise改成instead 以前人们做大量危险的工作
14、，现在电脑取代人们做这项工作。9. come改成coming 由句意可知，考试还没有来临，come用现在正在进行表示将来。10. but改成and 这里没有转折的意思。它会改正错误并且告诉我正确的答案。【英语卷（解析）2015届云南省部分名校高三1月份统一考试（201501）】第一节:短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线
15、，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Kunming is a famous city with long history. Locating in the southwest of China, it is the capital city of Yunnan Province, it is called “the Spring City”. It is said that Kunming got its name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed si
16、nce then. There is a large number of famous cultural and natural sites here, which have always been attraction to tourists from around the world. Tourists come not only to see the historically sites, but also because that it has beautiful scenery. A walk along the sides of the beautiful Dianchi Lake
17、 will offer a feast for everyones eyes. On a word, Kunming, as a famous saying goes, is a city which you will not want to leave once you have come.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：1. with long a with a long history 历史悠久； 2. Locating Located 位于，locate要用过去分词做状语；第二行： 3. 第一个it which 此处which引导的非限制性定语从句；4. it
18、s 改为its ，此处是形容词性物主代词做定语；第三行：5. had has 从那时到现在，应该用现在完成时态； 6. is are there be 句型应当和be后面的名词保持人称和书的一致，a large number of famous cultural and natural sites是复数，故应该把is改成are第四行：7. attraction attractions attraction “吸引人的事物”是可数名词，对应前面的sites，故用复数形式。第五行：8. historically 改为historical 形容词做定语。9. that去掉 because是从属连词，
19、that 多余；第六行：10.On改为 In，in a word ，固定短语，表示“总之。”【英语改错题的常见错误类型】1、谓语动词的时态和语态2、句子结构和句子完整性3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题4、上下文语意和代词5、介词 固定搭配6、固定（习惯）用法7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确9、连词和从句引导词10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确【英语卷（解析）2015届四川省德阳市高三第一次诊断考试（201412）word版 (1)】第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题15分，满分15分） 请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错
20、误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（、）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：l每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 3，请在答题卡上指定的地方作答。 Indices and gentlemen, its my honor to be here to making a speech in EnglishToday what I m going to share it with you is: always haw, a dreamYo
21、u should be dreamer yourselfIf you don t have a dreama plan and a wish, how can you know where you re going? Maybe some of your creams are unrealistic, but as long as you worked hard , your dreams can be realized some daysDreams, on the one hand, is not costly: they dont cost some money Even the poo
22、rest person on the world can have creamsOn the other hand, they are expensive, for you have to work terribly hard to make it come true Always lave a dream, ray friends【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：making改为make，前面的to是不定时，后用动词原形；第二行：be后加a，dreamer可是可数名词，故前面应加不定冠词a；第三行：and改为or，本句是否定句，用or代替and；第四行：worked改
23、为work，前后句都是现在时态，时态要一致；days改为day，some day总有一天，你的梦想会实现；第五行：is 改为 are，主语是dreams，要用复数；some改为any 否定句中用 any代替some；第六行：第一个on改为in，in the world固定短语； 【英语改错题的常见错误类型】1、谓语动词的时态和语态2、句子结构和句子完整性3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题4、上下文语意和代词5、介词 固定搭配6、固定（习惯）用法7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确9、连词和从句引导词10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确第七行：it改为them，代指前面
24、的dreams，用them，不用it。【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省日照市日照一中高三12月校际联合检测（201412）】第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用()划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词： 2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I used to feel I was
25、the sun in my familyBut when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to herSo I disliked her and couldnt get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that timeI tried to find a proper time to apologizeWhen my cousins family came to my home a few day ago
26、，I took my cousin to play outsideIn the way to the playgroundI bought much snacks for herThen we began chatWhen we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gentlyShe was silently，so I thought that she hadnt heard me clearlyBut after while she said：“Dont say thatIn my memory，you are always
27、friendly”【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。【答案解析】1. pays 改成paid 根据前文的used to过去常常，和我很引导的时间状语从句，此处应用过去时，故pays 改成paid。2. With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on with不可引导从句，故将With改成As引导时间状语从句或将went改为going，就是改成with + 宾语 + v-ing的with复合结构。3. have bee
28、n 改成had been 因为主句的realize是过去时，宾语从句必须用过去时态，故have改为had。4. day 改成days a few几个，修饰可数名词的复数形式，故day改为days。5. In the way 改成On the way on the way to在的路上，in the way挡路的，根据题意将On改为On。 6. much snacks 改成many snacks snack是可数名词，much修饰不可数名词，故将much改为many。7. chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to begin后跟不定式或v-ing形式作宾语，故chat改
29、成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to。8. their 改成our when引导的从句主语是we，谈论的应该是我们的童年时代，故their 改成our。9. silently改成silent she was应跟形容词作表语，故silently改成silent。10. after while 改成after a while while作名词时表示一段时间其前加不定冠词a，after awhile一段时间以后。【英语卷（解析）2015届吉林省实验中学高三上学期第二次模拟考试（201501）】第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分)假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交
30、换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下日记。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Mom,The Mothers Day is coming. Im sorry that I am abroadand cant send your flowers, so Im writing to you. Mom, I kn
31、ow I have never expressed my thank to youbefore. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tellyou loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by notonly giving me life, but also teach me how to be a goodperson. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, thoughI may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take yourpart in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you.Hope you good health and much happiness every day! Your little girl, Jennifer【答案】【知
