1、历届上海高考英语作文范文1汇编2013高考上海卷英语作文点评II. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）Dear Sir/ Madam,Ive
2、just learned that Shanghai Museum is to hold a famous painting exhibition and youre collecting public suggestions about which location to hold it. Im writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as Im concerned, it is more reasonable to hold the painting exhibition in Shanghai Museum th
3、an in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway and bus and so on. Whats more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providin
4、g visitors with a more comfortable environment to appreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum at home and abroad, is more professional in holding painting exhibitions. Whats of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced
5、facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum. Yours, Wang Min赏析： 今年上海市的高考英语
6、作文话题贴近学生的生活实际，用书信的载体呈现，让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说，但是想要达到A类作文，不仅需要有扎实语言功底，还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟，更需要学生从专业一点的角度，深入分析其选择的理由，这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述，学生平时学习时间紧张，没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动，而且在紧张的时间里，更别提用一些复杂的语言结构区展示自己的理由，所以学生写到高分不是很容易，大部分学生得到15/16分是没有问题的。采取这样的命题思路对英语教学有较好的反馈作用，学校和家庭不仅仅督促学生的学习更要提供机会让孩子走出课堂，走向社会，培养学生创造性和批判性思维。提
7、示：生活类词汇: museum library painting exhibition advanced facility high- tech monitor security guard 分词的应用：located providing distinguished句型：主语从句 标语从句 倒装等2012年上海高考英语作文Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions givenbelow in Chinese.上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂
8、绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括： 对两堂绘画课的具体描述； 你从中获得的启发。2012 Shanghai English Test writing sample 3( for reference only ) Today I had an unusual experience , which refreshed my mind. With pupils I spent two periods of time in a primary school, watching them learn how to paint. A little girl named Amy, o
9、ne student of the class, left me a deep impression with her unique painting. In the first lesson the teacher required the pupils to paint freely. Namely , in any way they could draw whatever theyd like to. Amy was the first one to have a try. I saw her think for a little while, take off her shoes, t
10、hen dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink. Much to my surprise, in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet. What happened next, various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one ,kept me laughing
11、 with joy and amusement. Following a break, the second class began. smiling ,the teacher made a brief comment, which was full of praise as well as appreciation. After that ,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting. With her teachers words in mind , Amy practiced agai
12、n. Painting-brush in hand ,she sat a desk properly/straight ,paying full attention to her work. This time，with ease and excitement she drew some birds flying high in the sky /sun. Looking back at the two ways of giving a class, I have to admit the teacher was well worth following in matters of culti
13、vating “flowers” in the spirit of originality. Given that children are of great imagination and elasticity in their growth , they are supposed to be given as many chances and opportunities as possible in the course of being educated so as to develop their potential to the full. Were the young always
14、 confined to the established ways of doing things without a free world ,one that is also longed for by the ambitious birds drawn by Amy , how can we expect the next generation our civilized nation would be more innovative and creative ?2012 Shanghai English Test writing sample 4( for reference only
15、) Today I had an unusual experience , which refreshed my mind. With pupils I spent two periods of time in a primary school, watching them learn how to paint. A little girl named Amy, one student of the class, left me a deep impression with her unique painting. In the first lesson the teacher require
16、d the pupils to paint freely. Namely , in any way they could draw whatever theyd like to. Amy was the first one to have a try. I saw her think for a little while, take off her shoes, then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink. Much to my surprise, in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a
17、 broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet. What happened next, various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one ,kept me laughing with joy and amusement. Following a break, the second class began. With a smile ,the teacher made a brief comment,
18、which was full of praise as well as appreciation. After that ,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting. With her teachers words in mind , Amy practiced again. Painting-brush in hand ,she sat a desk properly/straight ,paying full attention to her work. This time，with
19、ease and excitement she drew some birds flying high in the sky /sun. Simple and amusing as it seemed, the two ways of painting are thought-provoking. As is generally accepted ,students ,especially, children have great potential in their growth and development. As a matter of fact, whether their tale
20、nts can be developed to the full, to a great degree, depends on how children are educated. While some valuable traditions are well worth cherishing, thinking in an original way should be encouraged and emphasized among children when it comes to teaching or education, who are supposed to be character
21、ized by “innovation and creation ”. Only in this way, can they keep in pace with the fast-developing modern world.2011年上海卷高考英语作文范话题：向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生，需要包含以下的一些要点1.介绍自己 2.项目具体实施方案 3.2000元如何利用Dear foundation organizers,My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school
22、. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.Being raised in families that dont have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fo
23、rtunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school. It is worth noting that we would inform them to p
24、ick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the supplies so that we wouldnt embarrass those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and profess
25、ional decisions.Modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm some hearts. Much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience. Yours Sincerely, Jerry Lu2010年上海高考作文及范例 下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景比较你同时期的上课情况简单谈谈你的感受As is described in the picture, a
26、group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way. The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.Western students are more likely to be open-minded and willing to express their unique ide
27、as in class. Just as the picture shows: When the teacher is asking a question, every child raises their hands and is eager to answer the question. They do not fear giving the in-class performance while others are watching. This scene reminds me of my own class situation when I was at elementary scho
28、ol. As Chinese children are more often than not very conservative and modest, therefore, my teachers usually called a students name if nobody dared to answer the questions. Then the appointed child behaved awkwardly and was reluctant to say just a few words. This recollection makes me feel rather di
29、sappointed. In fact, we should at least give a try, whether the answer is perfect or not. Its a chance of learning, more specifically, if we are well-done, we will gain confidence; if not, we will get informed of a better solution, which will provide us experience in the later situation. All in all,
30、 its more sensible to be active in class.图画式议论文1. 特点： 是通过观察和分析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转化成文 字信息。2. 注意点：(1). 要认真审图(2). 需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容，处理好人物与时空的 关系及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题。(3). “丰满的想象 + 变化的表达”3. 结构： 第一段 描述图画，一般不超过三分之一篇幅 第二段 揭示画旨 （一般一言即可） 第三段 发表感想、评论或提出建议（占主要篇幅）第四段 简单谈谈自己的感受注意：二三两段可合成一段2009年上海高考作文及范例某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了
31、如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self- defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：1、你感兴趣的课程 2、你期望从这门课程中学到什么 3、为什么想学这些内容 It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I be
32、lieve it features my character and personal benefits.During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique Id like to obtain is to know how to tell different species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clear outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or the reasonable planting position
