1、中考英语书面表达专题复习精选24篇2007年中考英语书面表达专题复习精选24篇（朱桎踊整理）英语写作要注意以下两点。一） 正确审题, 纲举目张审题是写好文章的第一步。初中生的作文是以写人、写事为主的情景作文，提供情景的形式花样繁多、不一而足，常见的有提纲、图片、表格、关键词或引言等形式，虽形式各异，但只有正确审题，才能纲举目张。审题要做到弄清题目的要求、写作的意图，抓住要点，确定体裁，拟写提纲，确定所要表达的内容要点。因提供情景的形式不同，所以写作的要求也不同。1、以提纲形式提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意谴词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确
2、性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。2、以图画形式提供情景的作文。这种形式的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、数字等弄清写作的意图；通过分析思考，把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵，即“文在图上，意在画外”。如命题为“W hat kind of pollution do we have in Shanghai?” Picture 1：The factories let out polluted water；Picture 2：The ca
3、rs produce polluted smoke ；Picture 3：A man is coughing badly.写作时并不是简单的对图画进行描述，而是要通过这3幅图画的情景说明人类正在毁坏自己的家园，并唤醒人们的环保意识和与污染作斗争的决心，这样才能体现出这篇文章的灵魂。3、以图表形式提供情景的作文。这种形式的作文要以“读”为主，通过读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选概括，去粗存精。在写作时目的要明，要点要清，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不可出错。4、以关键词形式提供情景的作文。这种形式的作文要以“思”为主，通
4、过已给出的关键字的提示，展开遐想的翅膀，把每个词视为思维链上的轨迹，环环紧扣、节节相连。要注意，“思”要做到“思前顾后”，不可胡思乱想，文章既要打破框框和束缚，展得开，又能前后呼应，收得回。要注意关键词并不是文章的提纲，应学会从关键词中寻找文章的纲目，提炼文章的重点，确定笔墨的主次轻重。5、以引言形式提供情景的作文。如“Situation： Your pen pal Alice is an American girl. She has never been to Shanghai. She wants to know what Shanghai is like to- day.”，对于这类形式
5、的作文，首先设想自己要告诉A lice 一些什么内容，然后拟订提纲，再依纲行文，就不会盲目无序地乱写了。为了使文章更精彩、更具灵性，可以加上作者的情感、态度和观点，使文章鲜活起来。二）准确用词,言表意达对初中生来说，英语写作用词不能像母语那样信手拈来，常会受到生词、语法、惯用法等的限制，所以在写作时要注意用词的准确性、可能性和两种语言的异同性，把握好自我空间，即在考试的有限时间范围内和在你有限的知识能力范围内，发挥出自己应有的水平，尽量减少失分。1、遣词造句要准确。如要表达“地球正处于危险之中”，应为The earth is in danger.，而很多同学却写成The earth is da
6、ngerous ，此句意为“地球是危险的”而不是“地球正处于危险之中”；再如，玩电脑游戏应为Play computer games. play 意为“操作电脑游戏”，但很多同学用P lay with computer games. play with 是指“玩弄”的意思。2、人称、主要时态要固定。人称和时态不固定会造成人物关系混乱和时间顺序颠三倒四，为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，在确定了文体后就要把人称和时态定下来。如写人和写事一般用过去时写，为了避免把握不准时态，可以在文章的开头加上yesterday 、 last week 、 two days ago 等表示过去的时间状语。人称通常用“
7、我”或“他”来写比较好叙述，而且从头至尾时态和人称要一致，不能随意改动，以免造成混乱。3、避免使用自己无把握的词。有些同学为了使自己的文章一鸣惊人，不愿意使用熟悉的常用词，而片面追求一些生冷的词汇，这些词他们往往不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果适得其反，使文章显得生硬不协调，甚至错误连篇。如要表达“他没能和朋友联系上”，He failed to keep in touch with his friend. failed 表示“没能够”，但有些同学从“文曲星”等工具上查得disenable ，其意思为“使不能够”，是不可以代替f ail 的。所以在写作时，主动权掌握在自己手中，实事求是地选择自己有把
8、握的词，避免不必要的失分是能够做得到的。4、注意两种语言的异同性。不同的语言有各自的表达习惯，如“我的理想是做个医生”，很多同学写成My ambition is to do / make a doctor. to do表示“做”或者“干”，to make 表示“制作”，而“做一个医生”则表示“成为一个医生”，应该用“be / become a doctor ”；再如，“看书、看报”应用read a book / newspaper ，而不是 see a book / newspaper ；“把书忘在家里”应该用l eave a book at home ，而不是 forget a book a
9、t home 等。因此平时应该特别注意不同的语言的习惯表达，望文生义，一味的生搬硬套，只会闹出诸如“我的理想是制作一个医生”的笑话。5、注意文采和逻辑结构。文章不是单词的堆砌，也不是简单句的罗列，既然是文章就理所当然的要考虑到文采。有些同学怕出错，只写短语和简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞和贫乏，要使文章言之有物、有血有肉，就要把平时学的知识用上去，如从句、非谓语动词和比较等句式，关键时刻用上一两个，就会起到鹤立鸡群的效果，使文章增色不少；再如对高级词汇的使用也可以显示出文章的文采。如very important 较平常，但用essential 就显得高出一筹；helpful 用of grea
10、t help ， finally 用 eventually ， dirty water 用专业词汇sewage等。关联词如now that， not but， the more the more， not only but also 等的使用，会使文章逻辑结构紧密，层次鲜明，条理清楚，就更加显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的训练和不断积累。那麽英文写作如何得高分？这要从对英文写作的评价标准入手。初中英文写作的评价标准通常要考虑以下六个方面：1.你所表达的内容是否与中文提供的情景一致，是否达意。2.单词拼写错误，语法时态及句子结构错误是否影响了内容的准确性。3.扩展部分的逻
11、辑推理是否与所提供的中文情景相关，所用语言是否准确的表达了你的思想。4.能否使用恰当的关联词或者复合句使文段内容完整，逻辑合理，结构正确。5.是否注意了必要的造句技巧，句子开头大写及句尾的标点符号。6.卷面是否整洁。因此，写作高分不是以高级词汇及从句的堆积取得的。而是由合理的逻辑思维能力，熟练运用英文基础词汇及语法准确表达思想的能力，以及基础写作技巧的运用能力得到的。二、典例解析1、下面描述的是2006年11月15日(周三，晴天)你的一次经历，请根据其内容，写一篇80词左右的日记。注意要点完整，语法正确，上下文连贯，并适当发挥。要点：下午放学后；爸爸出差，妈妈卧床生病；照顾妈妈送医院、买药、煮
12、饭、洗衣服等等；后来受父母表扬；该经历对自己的感触。November,15,2006,Wednesday SunnyWhen I got home this afternoon.I found my mother was lying in bed. She was sick and my father was away on business.What should I do then? Since Mother was ill,I should take care of her.I first sent her to hospital and bought some medicine. Wh
13、en we got home,I began to cook dinner and wash clothes.I was praised by my parents later for this.I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family.2、为了提高英语口语表达能力，假设你班明天下午将召开一次以“Keep Our Shool Clean”为主题的班会，请根据要点用英语写一篇简短的发言稿。不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾；不在墙上乱涂乱画；坚持每天认真打扫教室内外卫生。注意：80词左右；不要逐字翻译；发
14、言稿的开头和结尾已写出(不计入点词数)Good afternoon,everyone给出We are studying in this school,Its our duty to keep it clean and tidy.Its not good to spit in public places,such as in the library,in the classroom, on the playground. We should neither draw pictures on the walls nor throw any litter onto the ground.I thin
15、k we must make it a rule to do some cleaning every day.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school.Im sure our school will be more beautiful.Thats all.Thank you.给出3、根据提示，以“The Jacksons Sunday ”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，要求使用所给全部要点。(开头已给出)星期天杰克逊一家起得很早。平时不大吃早饭，但星期天常吃。饭后去教堂，遇见很多人，之后去公园。全天在公园里
16、，划般，树下吃野餐，饭后孩子们放风筝，杰克逊夫妇钓鱼下午，孩子们在草坪(lawn)上玩，夫妇散步，玩得痛快。The Jacksons SundayThe Jacksons get up very early on sunday.Usually they dont eat much breakfast in the morning.but on Sunday they often have a big breakfast.After breakfast they go to church first.They meet a lot of people in the church.Then,the
17、y go to the park.They spend almost the whole day there.First they go boating on the lake.Then they sit under the trees and have their picnic.After lunch the children fly their kites and Mr. and Mrs. Jackson take a walk around the lake.They all have a wonderful time on Sunday.4.小明和小华是在“手拉手”活动中结成的一对学习
18、伙伴。前不久，小明来信向小华询问如何学好英语。请你以小华的名义给他写封回信。内容包括： 1学习英语的基本方法(listen carefully; speak much; read widely; learn.by heart; practise writing;.);2你的体会和其他建议。词数：80词左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Xiao Ming,Im glad to receive your letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English well. I think you must l
19、isten carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Youd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You should practise writing often. Of course there are many other ways. You can also see English films, learn to sing English songs o
20、r make penfriends with foreigners. They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Im sure youll learn English well. Yours, Xiao Hua5. 写一篇有关你和你就读的学校开展体育活动的短文。 要求：所写短文必须包括以下提示要点；意思表达清楚，文句通顺、连贯，单词拼写正确，标点无误；至少写出7个句子，字数70左右。(不包括已经给出的句子)。 要点：1学校每年秋季举办运动会。去年运动会上你获跳远第一名。 2同学们
21、通常有早锻炼、做眼保健操、课后有时打篮球或踢足球。 3介绍你最喜欢(favourite)参加和观看的运动项目。 4运动有益于身体健康(health)，你准备进行更多锻炼。 My School Sport I study at No. 2 Middle School. There is a sports meeting in our school every autumn/Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn/A sports meeting is held in our school every autumn. I took the fi
22、rst place/was first in the long jump/won the long jump last year. We usually take exercise in the early morning. We do eye exercises in the afternoon. After school/class we play basketball or football. My favourite sport is football/I like football best. I often watch a football match on TV on Sunda
23、ys. I think(doing)sport is good for our health/(doing) sport makes us healthier and stronger. I am going to take/do more exercise/do more sport.6. 请根据下面的提示，以“Internet and Our life”写一篇文章，80个词左右。开头已给出。 1、21世纪是时代信息，随着科技的发展，信息越来越重要。 2、电脑改变着我们的生活。电脑带来了崭新的联系方式，缩小了世界。电脑提供了大量的信息，满足了人们的需要。 提示： communication
24、n. 联系，交流 communicate v. 联系 Internet and Our lifeIt is said that the 21st century is the Information Age. With the development of science and technology, information has become more and more important to everyone. Nowadays, more and more people have their own computers and the Internet plays a very i
25、mportant part in their daily life. First, the internet brings us a new way of communication. In every corner of world we can find internet. We can communicate with our relatives and friends living abroad on the internet. Second, the internet brings us a lot of information. We can know what is happen
26、ing in the world and what were interested in. With the internet, we can see the world has become smaller and smaller. 7. 下面的提示，以“希望小学”为题写一篇短文，字数80字左右。 1、中国农村许多孩子因穷困而失学 2、好心人捐款助学，创办了希望小学。 3、许多希望小学条件良好，有教学楼和漂亮的操场。孩子学习努力、成绩优秀。 4、希望更多的人来帮助希望小学，使更多的孩子受到良好的教育。 生词提示： Hope school 希望小学 , poverty 贫困 contribut
27、ing money 捐款, teaching condition 教学条件 Hope Primary SchoolIn the country of China, Many children cant go to school because of poverty. But so many warmhearted people are helping them by contributing money. And with the money, they are building schools. Many of these schools have very good teaching co
28、nditions. In these schools you can find modern teaching buildings and a beautiful playground. The students in these schools study very hard and always do a good job. Because they all know that Hope School brought them the chance to go to school again. I hope more and more people will help the Hope S
29、chool, and more and more children will be able to go to the first-class school.8、关于学习英语的话题 How to learn English well?English is one of the most important langnages in the world. Its necessary to learn it well .How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways. The best way to improve your
30、English is to improve your English skills. They are listening , speaking , reading and writing. We should practice them every day. Its very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish . You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful. One more thing, remember“Practice makes perfect”!9. 关
31、于环境保护（水资源节约）的话题 Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees and air pollution,water polloution is very serious . The envi
