专题十六 读后续写Word格式.docx
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schecksMomhadforgotten.
DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenerv
ouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:
“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI
llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:
“Honey,wherearethekids?
”“What?
!
Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren
tabouttotakeanychances.
Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:
Whydidn
twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?
DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.
Paragraph2
Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.
答案
【写作提示】
原文是一篇有关家庭旅游生活的故事。
文章内容贴近生活,中学生容易发挥想象去续写。
续写的内容应该还是按照家庭旅游的主线来进行,当然,涉及“妈妈健忘,但是很善良”的特点也是续写的关注点。
【参考范文】
Paragraph1:
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsthereweresurpassinglybeautiful—thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater.Wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,hewasdisappointedtofindthatithadbeenleftinthehotel.Well,Dadhadtogobacktofetchittocontinueourcamping.
Paragraph2:
Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecarexcitedly,laughinganddancingaround.Togetherweenjoyedthemodernsightsinthebigcities,thehistorical
buildingsinthesmalltownsandtheamazingsceneryinnature.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,Momwouldhugusandkissusonourfaces.Howsweetshewas!
Absent-mindedandforgetfulasshewas,sheneverforgottoexpressherlovetous.
Writing2(2019浙江6月)
Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.
ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that
sabigdog!
”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn
tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.
Mac
sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac
srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac
sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).
Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he
dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf
steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.
Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn
tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.
Afewminuteslater,theothercyclistsarrived.
【写作提示】
文章题材仍然和野外生活相关,故事具有冒险性。
原文是主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车旅游时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。
就在最危险的时候PaulandBecky驱车走进。
这样,精彩的故事进一步展开。
本文故事设计具有很大发展空间。
根据文章的第一段提示句,本段应该描述Paul和Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的,而根据第二段的提示句,本段则应该是Mac的朋友到来之后发生的事。
考生可以根据自己的理解和想象进行合理的续写。
一定要注意续写的内容的合理性,不可脱离原文的故事无限发展。
Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macrusheddownfromhisbicycleandwavedatthepeopleinsidethecarforhelp.PaulandBeckyinsidethecargotoutimmediatelytohelphimclimbintothecar,inspiteofthedangerthatthefiercewolfwasrunningnear.TheyquicklypushedMacintotheircarandclosedallthedoorsashardaspossible,legstremblingandbreathless.Seeingthis,thewolfstillhowledoutsidethecarforsometimeandthenleftunwillingly.
Afewminuteslater,theothercyclistsarrived.Mac
sfriendswereshockedtohearthestoryandverygratefultotheyoungcouple.Macinvitedallofthembacktohishomefordinnerandheintroducedhiswifeanddaughterstohistwonewfriendswhosavedhislife.Duringthedinnertheyrecalledtheadventureandtalkedaboutthewaystodealwithsuchdangeroussituations.
Writing3(2019浙江10月)
OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I
mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.
Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.
“Tom!
”shecried.“Help!
”
Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.
Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldle
adhertothelake.
Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?
Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.
Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.
ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.
这是一篇情节自然,但是有冒险色彩的故事。
原文讲到Tom和Jane因琐事吵架,后来Jane意外迷失在森林。
根据原文及所给的段首句,续写部分的构思不会太难。
根据第一段的首句可知,本段应该描述当天晚上Jane的心态和行动。
而根据第二段的提示句可知,本段主要叙述Jane最终是如何获救的。
当然,在续写中,一定要反映出Jane的坚韧和聪明,同时,最后一定要有Tom努力救援的信息,这样的续写故事结尾才有正能量。
【参考范文】
Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Shehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Janewassotiredanddisappointed,butshedidn
tloseheart.SheknewTommustbetryinghisbesttosearchforher.ShebelievedthatthehelicoptermusthavebeencalledbyTomandwassureitwouldcomebackagaintomorrow.Shefoundaplacenearthestreamandslept.
ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shewalkedalongthestream,hopingtofindasuitableplacesothatthehelicoptercouldfindher.Shewassoluckythatbeforelongabigrockappeared,whichwashighabovethetrees.Theresheclimbedandwaitedwithheryellowblouseinhandforthehelicoptertocomeagain.Tohergreatjoy,shedidn
twaitlongbeforeshesawthehelicopterinthesky.Shewavedhardwiththeyellowblouseandthehelicopterquicklyfoundher.ShewasrightanditwasTo
mwhocalledthehelicopterandsavedher.
【三年模拟】
模拟题组
Writing1(2019浙江金丽衢十二校二模)
Ihavebeenintheteachingprofessionmorethanthirtyyears,andoneofthebestteachersIhave
everknownwasMr.Rowe.
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