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I(LiHua),You(Allen)
时态
一般现在时,一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:
点明写作目的,并表达问候
主题段落:
此次活动的内容和目的,并希望Allen表演节目
结尾:
再一次真诚邀请
Step2:
头脑风暴字字珠玉
(1)美词:
aimat,enrich,promote,beinvolvedin,issuethecertificate,highlight,confirm
(2)佳句:
①Aimingtoenrichthestudents’schoollifeandpromoteourChinesetraditionalculture,thefestivalisscheduledfromMondaytoFridaynextweekintheauditorium,duringwhichtimeavarietyofactivitieswillbeorganized,suchasNationalCostumeShow,ChineseTraditionalInstrumentdisplayandClassicalChinesePlaysPerforming,andsoon.
②Iamconfidentthatyourpresenceandparticipationwillbeamongthehighlightofthefestival.
Step3:
斟酌词句妙笔生花
要点1:
音乐节安排在下周的周一到周五,在礼堂举行。
一般表达:
ThefestivalisscheduledfromMondaytoFridaynextweekintheauditorium.
词汇或句式升级:
(分词作状语以及定语从句)
旨在丰富学生的学校生活,促进传统文化,我们将举办音乐节,节日安排在下周一到周五的礼堂举行,届时将组织各种各样的活动。
Aimingtoenrichthestudents’schoollifeandpromoteourChinesetraditionalculture,thefestivalisscheduledfromMondaytoFridaynextweekintheauditorium,duringwhichtimeavarietyofactivitieswillbeorganized.
要点2:
音乐节的末尾,我们希望您能表演节目,并为获奖者颁发证书。
Attheendofthefestival,we’dlikeyoutobeinvolvedintheperformanceaswellasissuethecertificatestothewinners.
升级表达:
相信您的到场和参与将会成为音乐节最精彩的部分。
Attheendofthefestival,we’dlikeyoutobeinvolvedintheperformanceaswellasissuethecertificatestothewinners.Iamconfidentthatyourpresenceandparticipationwillbeamongthehighlightofthefestival.
Step4:
衔接过渡 斐然成篇
DearAllen,
Howareyoudoing?
I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusintheMusicFestivaltobeheldinourschool.Ifeelhonoredifyouarepresent.
Aimingtoenrichthestudents’schoollifeandpromoteourChinesetraditionalculture,thefestivalisscheduledfromMondaytoFridaynextweekintheauditorium,duringwhichtimeavarietyofactivitieswillbeorganized,suchasNationalCostumeShow,ChineseTraditionalInstrumentdisplayandClassicalChinesePlaysPerforming,andsoon.Attheendofthefestival,we’dlikeyoutobeinvolvedintheperformanceaswellasissuethecertificatestothewinners.Iamconfidentthatyourpresenceandparticipationwillbeamongthehighlightofthefestival.
Wouldyoupleaseconfirmyourparticipationatyourconvenience?
Igenuinelyhopethatyoucansqueezesometimeforourfestivalandhavefunwithus.
Yours,
LiHua
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。
请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
DearHenry
I’mLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowI’mgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.
Theexhibition,whosethemeis“beautyofChina”,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Notonlywillourclub’sworksbedisplayed,butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.
Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.I’msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!
I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Bestwishes!
类型二建议信
(2018·
全国卷Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件。
内容包括:
1.到达时间;
2.合适的礼物;
3.餐桌礼仪。
类型
建议信
第二人称(you)
一般现在时
要点
①欢迎到中国做客,愿意提供建议
②到访(朋友家)时间
③餐桌礼仪
头脑风暴 字字珠玉
thetimetoarrive,theappointedtime,thesuitablepresents,tablemanners.
IamverygladtohearthatyouwillcometoChinaforavisit.
It’smypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceontheChinesecustomsaboutvisiting.
斟酌词句 妙笔生花
得知你要来中国朋友家做客,真是太好了。
It’sgreattohearyou’reinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome.
→很高兴得知你将来中国朋友家做客,并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗。
(增加细节)
It’ssogreattohearyou’reinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shomeandwanttoknowtheChinesecustomaboutvisiting.
→很荣幸可以与你分享我的经历和介绍相关的中国传统与风俗。
(高级句型)
ItisagreathonortosharemyexperienceandintroducetherelevantChinesecustomandtraditiontoyou.
首先,到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。
Firstly,makesuretoarriveontime,orabitearlier.
→根据中国传统,比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好,准时到达也可以。
AccordingtoChinesetradition,itisbettertoarrive5or10minutesearlierbeforetheappointedtimebutitisfineontime.
要点3:
希望你在中国玩得愉快.
IhopeyoucanenjoyyourstayinChina.
DearTerry,
It’ssogreattohearyou’reinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shomeandwanttoknowsomethingaboutChinesecustoms.
Firstly,accordingtoChinesetradition,itisbettertoarrive5or10minutesearlierbeforetheappointedtimebutitisfineontime.Ifyou’dliketobringagift,fruitisusuallyagoodchoice.Atthedinnertable,itisappropriatetowaitfortheelderlypeopleinthefamilytostarteating.Butiftheyinsistthatyoustartfirst,justgoahead.Sometimesthehostoffersguestsmorefoodthantheyneed.Inthatcase,it’sOKtoletthemknowyouarefull.
IhopeyoucanenjoyyourstayinChina.
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。
请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2.赞赏该报优点:
兼顾国内外新闻,介绍名人成功故事;
3.提出建议:
刊登指导英语学习的文章。
Deareditor-in-chief,
Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!
I’maregularreaderofyournewspaper.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.First,itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnewssothat,bysimplyturningthepages,Icanlearnallimportantthingsthathavehappenedduringtheweek.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.
Asayoungstudent,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorcarryarticlestoguideusinourEnglishlearning,andIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.
Yourssincerely,
类型三道歉信
(2016·
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
I(LiHua),You(Bob)
点明写作目的,并表达歉意
说明致歉的原因
再次致歉,并另约时间
expressmyheartfeltapology;
representourschooltodo;
available;
asaresult
①Ican’tgowithyouasplanned.
②I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyou.
③HowaboutgoingtothebookstorethisSunday.
很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。
I’msorrythatIcan’tgowithyoutothebookstore.
句式升级(高级词汇,名词性从句,分词作状语)
我诚挚地向你道歉,这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。
IhavetoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyouthatIcan’tgowithyoutothebookstorethisFridayasplanned.
我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。
I’mchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetition.
句式升级(定语从句,for引导的并列句)
我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛,这对我非常重要,因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛,展示我们的实力。
I’mchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetition,whichisofimportancetome,forIhavebeendreamingofhavingsuchachancetoshowourstrengthonbehalfofmyschool.
这个周的周日如何?
那时你是否有时间呢?
HowaboutgoingtothebookstorethisSunday?
Willyoubeavailablethen?
句式升级(高级词汇,意趣盎然)
WoulditbeconvenientforyouifwegotothebookstorethisSunday?
DearBob,
I’mindeedverysorrythatIcan’tgotothebookstorewithyouthisFridayasplanned.
HowIwishIcouldgowithyou!
However,I’mchosentorepresentourschooltotakepartintheEnglishdebatecompetition,whichisofgreatimportancetome,forIhavebeendreamingofhavingsuchachancetoshowourstrengthonbehalfofmyschool.Asaresult,Ihavetomissourappointment.
Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfromthebottomofmyheart.WoulditbeconvenientforyouifwegotothebookstorethisSunday?
I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
假如你是育才中学的学生李华,昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师MissCheng发现了,你的数学书被英语老师收走了。
请用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信,内容应包括以下要点:
1.向老师道歉;
2.解释上课为什么做数学作业;
3.提出自己的请求并作出保证。
1.词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
DearMissCheng,
LiHua
DearMissCheng,
Isincerelyapologizetoyoufordoingmathshomeworkinyourclass.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldforgiveme.
Havingbeencaughtdoingotherthingsinyourclass,Iknowanyexcusemaybemeaningless.However,IdidsobecausemymotherhappenedtofallillyesterdayandIhadtosendhertohospitalandlookafterherbymyself,for
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