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雅思写作冲刺讲义
雅思写作冲刺
时间:
一个小时,无法超时
上午九点考试,写作往往是11点开始考。
一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。
雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个,比托福等都长。
图表作文只占了1/3的分数,那议论文就占了2/3。
G类也要按A类要求去做。
Academicwriting的特殊要求
1.Someteachersdon'tknowhowtousecomputerstohelpthestudentseffectively.不能用缩写,凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手,专业选手必须要用,donot..Shouldn't也是错的,特别提醒大家,cannot中间没有空格。
如果你不相信我说的话,我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6,一个缩写你都找不到。
2.Historicbuildingsattractslotsofvisitorsandcanimprovelocaleconomy.大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。
其中lotsof是特别口语化词汇,可以用numerous或者ahostof这两个单词修饰可数名词。
Agreatdealof不可数。
3.Theimpactoftourismontheseneighbourhoodsshouldbeanalyzed.下次你看到任何-ze结尾的都是美式英语,-se结尾的都是英式英语,而这里的neighbourhood是英式英语,而neighborhood是美式英语,有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢?
不是这样的,在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式,但两者不能混合使用。
我建议大家-our-se是英式的,-or-ze是美式的,这两者的区别是最常见的,其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。
4.Childreninwealthyfamiliesaremoreandmoredependontheirparents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。
Moreandmore,给大家推荐一个词,increasingly.
5.Seriouscrimesharmpeople'slives.雅思针对的母语是非英语的人,大家看考官的作文也不是很难。
但这里serious高中词汇,crimeharm初中词汇,people和life就是小学词汇了,给大家推荐一个severe,criminalact,damagedestroy,impairpeople'shealth,humanbeing这个词太大,不建议使用,individual
6.Theadvantagesofstoppinganimalexperimentsaremorethancontinuingthem.其中morethan换成outweigh
7.Today,advertisementsareeverywhere.Therearemanywaystoadvertisements.简单句不适用,中间加个连词即可。
8.Theenvironmentisbecomingworse.Wemustworktogethertodealwithit.因果关系,加because就很一般了哈,加个therefore.
9.So,wemusttakestepstodealwiththeenvironmentproblem!
So换成therefore,大家在写作中,千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈,好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的,所以,感叹号去掉,还有,must换成should.
10.WemustbefriendlytoothersbecausetheBiblesaid,"treatyourneighboursasyouwouldliketobetreated."不能出现宗教语言。
大作文,40分钟,最低要求240字,要求考高分的同学,建议270-280,7分以上的同学,我建议300字以上。
大家刚看了雅思真题库,不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。
但是如果没有素材的话,你再好的基础都无法体现出来。
Tourism
Education
Government
Womenandfamilies
Languageandculture
Technologyandthemedia
Developmentandglobalization
Crime
Animals
Environmentalproblems
雅思不会出时事类的话题,只出争议比较大的话题。
常见的词汇,常见的句式都可以通用。
推荐大家掌握思考方法
A.分类法
Somepeoplethinkoldbuildingsshouldbedestroyedandreplacedwithmodernbuildings.Towhatextentdoyouagree?
老房子可以分成要拆的,和不要拆的。
这样子就有四段。
这样子词汇可以成倍增加。
开头用模板
主题两段不要写一样长,一段可以多写一个理由,这样子你的倾向比较明显。
Somehighschoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotouniversity.Towhatextentdoyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantage?
分成文科类,理科类的
B.替代法
Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree?
形容词最高级/only/stop(ban)存在漏洞
替代法
飞机很伟大,但存在争议,主体第一段先让步,写两个理由,好处飞机的。
主体第二段可以举电脑,手机,举三个反例
Somepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroads.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
主体第一段可以先让步,效率很高,政府的投入很少
第二段可以举三个反例,行人,警察,设施,只管司机是不够的,还要管其他的。
Somepeoplethinkanimalexperimentationshouldbebanned.Towhatextentdoyouagree?
主体第一段,残忍,传播疾病
第二段,医学,制药工业,航天技术,心理学的研究。
不用动物用人的话更残忍。
现阶段无法禁止,只能尽量少用。
C.裸奔法
TMSTREEC(真正的裸奔是streaker音译啊)$
Technology&efficiency
Mindsoul
Societycrime
Timespace
Rightsresponsibilities
Environmenthealth
Employmentcompetition
Culturepopulation
Moneyfun
任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题
写作中可以引用的16句名人名言
Education
1“Achildmiseducatedisachildlost."--JohnF.Kennedy
2"Educationisnotthefillingofapail,butthelightingofafire."--W.B.Yeats
3“Technologyisjustatool.Intermsofgettingthekidsworkingtogetherandmotivatingthem,Theteacheristhemostimportant."---BillGates.
Technology
“Thegreatestdangerinmoderntechnologyisnotthatmachinesbegintothinklikepeople,butthatpeoplewillbegintothinklikemachines.”――AlbertEinstein
5“Aswegoforward,Ihopewe'regoingtocontinuetousetechnologytomakereallybigdifferencesinhowpeopleliveandwork."---SergeyBrin
Media
6“Hewhocontrolsthemedia,controlsthemind.“---RupertMurdock
Government
7“Millionsofindividualsmakingtheirowndecisionsinthemarketplacewillalwaysallocateresourcesbetterthananycentralizedgovernment."–RonaldReagan
Tourism
8“Theworldisabook,andthosewhodonottravel,readonlyapage.”
SaintAugustine
WomenandFamilies
9“Thebondthatlinksyourtruefamilyisnotoneofblood,butofrespectandjoyineachother’slife.”RichardBach
Language
10“Topossessasecondlanguageistopossessasecondsoul.”–Charlemagne
Culture
11“Culturemeansthewideningofthemindandofthespirit.”–RuthBenedict
Globalization
12“Globalizationisnotsomethingthatwecanholdofforturnoff.Itistheeconomicequivalentofaforceofnature—likewindorwater.”
---BillClinton
Crime
13“Hewhodoesnotpreventacrimewhenhecanencouragesit.“---RomanphilosopherSeneca
Animals
14Thegreatnessofanationanditsmoralprogresscanbejudgedbythewayitsanimalsaretreated.----Gandhi
Environment
15“Manyanthropogenicactivitiesfoultheair,contaminatethewateranddevastatetheforests.”---quotedinNewsweek
16“Don’tblowit--goodplanetsarehardtofind.”quotedinTimemagazine
第三讲
正确理解7种句子成分
雅思需要的语法不是范围很宽,也不是很深,但对熟练度有要求。
1Smokingisjustapersonalchoiceratherthanamoralissue.(主语可以是动名词,不定式和从句)
2Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleagreethatgamblingisanunhealthyhobby.(谓语只能是动词)
3Junkfoodimpairspeople’shealth(impair是破坏的意思,固定搭配health,宾语的组成成分和主语完全一样。
)
4Inrecentyears,theInternethasbeengaininginpopularityatanamazingrate.(定语,这也是个常用词汇)
5Outdooractivitiescangreatlyimproveourhealth.(状语,修饰动词,修饰形容词,或是修饰整个句子的词都可以叫做状语。
)
6Shopping,annecessaryactivityineverydaylife,isfarmoreconvenientinthecitythaninthecountry.(同位语,并不是修饰这个名词,而是把这个名词的成分展开来说,是补充说明)
7Ifoundtheemploymentsituationdisappointing.(补语,动词加名词,加形容词或分词,是常见的一种结构)
正确使用四种特殊句式
a状语提前
Obviously,ifelderlypeopleliveathome,theirchildrencantakecareofthemandtheyfeellesslonely.
Overall,(雅思考官在结尾段的最爱)thefunctionofabuildingismoreimportanttoabuildingthanitsappearance.
IamfondoftheWesternculture.Specifically,IthinktheFrenchcultureisreallysecondtonone.
Mostimportantly,thegovernmentshouldmakesurethatcitizenscanimprovetheirlives.
Intermsofattitude,TeddyBearisaverygoodteacher.(明显让句子变的更灵活,放在句中的话,没有这么好的感觉。
)
Toreducetrafficjams,thegovernmentshouldencouragepeopletotakethesubway.(为了达到什么目的,todosth.)
Livinginpoverty,thesepeopledonotevenhavemoneytobuyenoughfood.
WithoutanIELTSscore,onecannotgetavisafromtheembassy.(领事馆)
b倒装句
Notonlyshouldtheparentsspendmoretimewiththeirchildren,theyshouldalsotrytocommunicatewiththeirchildrenmoreoften.(notonly前半句倒装)
Onlyinthiswaycanthisissuebeeffectivelysolved.
c强调句
Itistheslitsthatmakeachi-paoreallyspecial.
ItisthetraditionsinBeijingthatattractmanyforeigntourists.
d虚拟语气
Ifthiswerenottrue,thenwewouldfinditimpossibletopredicthowthestockmarketwoulddevelop.
Theschoolswouldseemveryimpersonalwereallthecomputerstoreplacehumanteachers.
雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义
有效避免7种语法错误
1Employeecanbenefitmorefromtelecommuting(远距离)thanemployer.(可数名词是不可以单独使用的)前后各加一个-s
2.1Workathomeusingmoderntechnologycangreatlyenhanceourefficiency.(动词原形不能做主语)
2.2Childrenwhoareraiseinimpoverishedfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears.(一定不要忘记被动要加-ed)
2.3Theproblemsthatarecreatedbyenvironmentalcontamination(污染,可以代替pollution)isveryhardtoresolve.(主谓不一致,主语很长的时候一定不要忘了看下谓语动词是单数还是复数)
2.4Manystudentsareverylikestudyinghomeeconomics.(like在这里是动词,什么时候是介词?
)
2.5Inpresent-daysociety,cultureswerebecomingverysimilar.(谓语动词的时态,)
3Intelligentstudentsshouldnotbetreateddifferentlybytheirteachers.
4.1Countriesshouldpayattentiononthedisadvantagesglobalisationmaycreate.(that在这里省略)toreasonsfor/importanttosb./it'simportantforsb.Todo/solutiontoaproblem
4.2TheInternethasinsteadofteachersinmanyclassrooms.(replace)
5Someparentsdonotobeytrafficruleshimself.(themselves)
6SomepeoplethinktheInternetonlyhaspositiveimpact,otherpeoplethinkitalsohasnegativeinfluenceonourlives.(插入and)
7ThereareagreatmanychildrenthinkthemainpurposeofeducationshouldbetoaffordthempleasureandEnjoyment.(affordsb.Sth.Thinking)
高分范文讲解
范文讲解
InBritain,whensomepeoplegetoldtheyoftengotoliveinahomewithotheroldpeoplewheretherearenursestolookafterthem.Thegovernmenthastopayforhiscare.Whoshouldberesponsibleforouroldpeople?
Givereasonsforyouranswer.
Example2Band8
Oneofthemostchallengingproblemsoftoday’ssocietyis(主语是one)thequestionaboutwhoshouldberesponsibleforouroldpeople.Itisnotonly(not,only没有放句首不用倒装)aproblemwithmoneybutalsoaquestionofthesystemwewantoursocietytohave.Inmyessay,Iwouldliketopresentfourpossiblemodels.
Firstly,thecompanycouldberesponsibleforitsretiredemployees.Todothis,(状语提前)aspecialfundcouldbeestablished.Theadvantageofthismodelisthatifonebelievesinthecapitalistsystem,itshouldbethecheapestsolution.Onepossibleproblemisthatthecompaniesmayhavecompetitiondisadvantagesduetohigherstaffcosts.
Asecondsolutionisthatthegovernmenthastotaketheresponsibilityfortheoldpeople’scare.Itcanfinancethiswithitstaxincomes.Actually,(状语提前)thisisthemostdemocraticmodelsinceeverybodygetsasmuchmoneyasheorsheneeds.Unfortunately,asthepresentsituationinourcountryshows,thissolutionseemsnottoworkverywell.Thegovernmentcannolongeraffordtosupportalltheoldpeoples(错了).
Anotherwayofsolvingtheproblemistogivebacktheresponsibilityto
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