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作文评分标准
作文
TheCertificateCraze
1、现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2、其目的各不相同
3、在我看来……
14分
Itisacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatpeoplehurryfromoneexaminationtoanotherinpursuingallkindsofcertificates.Somepeoplearedeterminedtogetmanycertificatesinarelativelyshortperiodoftimeandpreparingforexamshasbecomethefocusoftheirlife.
Thepurposeoftakingexamsvaries.Somepeoplethinkthatgettingacertificatecanbeaproofoftheirability,whileothersjustwanttogetanaccesstohighereducationoverseas.Stillotherstakepleasureincopingwiththechallengesposedbycertificateexams.Formostpeoplewhowanttopursueabetterlife,obtainingacertificateistheonlychoice.
Inmypointofview,itisthedemandofcertificatesthatleadstothe“certificatecraze”.Thehighcompetitivesocietydrivespeoplemadforcertificatesthatarebelievedtobethevitalweapontowininfiercecompetitions.Forpeoplewhoapplyforadecentjob,arightcertificateprobablymakesthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Thisisalsotruewithstudentswholongforanofferfromworld-famousuniversities.Solongasthereisademandforcertificates,thecrazeforthemisinevitable.
11分
Nowadays,manypeopleespeciallycollegestudentsliketotakeallkindsoftestsforthecertificates,suchasCET4or6,GRE,ComputerTestandsoforth.
Peoplewhotakepartinthesetestshavetheirownpurposes.Somewanttogetthecertificatessothattheycanfindjobsmoreeasily.Someneedthecertificatessothattheycangetthequalificationtostudyabroad.Afewpeoplemaywanttogetthecertificatesjusttoshowofftheirspecialabilitiestoothers.Someotherpeoplewishtoprovethemselvesandincreasetheirconfidenceaftertheysucceedingettingthecertificates.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’snotwisetotakepartinsomanytestsandgetthecertificates.Thethingweshoulddofirstistofindoutwhatiswereallyneedandwhatiswereallywanttodo.Andthenwecanstriveforthat.Weshouldn’tcloseoureyesandjustfollowothersaimlessly.Forourselves,takingthetestscancostusalotoftimeandenergy;forthesociety,it’salsoakindofwaste.Collegesshouldalsotakesomemeasurestoleadthestudentstochoosewisely.
8分
Withthepressoffindingjobs,itbecomesmuchmorepopulartogetmorethanakindofcertifications,especiallyforthecollegestudents.WenameitCertificateCraze.TheCertificateCrazedrivesustobebusyinpreparingforavarietyofexamssuchasTOEFL,computerExamandsoon.
However,todifferentpeople,thereasonwhytheywanttogetcertificationsisdifferent.Someofthemthinkit’snecessaryforthemtofindabetterjob.Intheiropinion,thefirmsjudgetheabilityofemployersbythecertificationwhichtheyown.Otherstreatthecertificationastheexamoftheirownability.ButmostofthemjustwanttofollowthetremeofCertificateCraze.
Inmyperspective,theCertificateCrazehasgoodeffectonus,italsoleadsustodoingsomeuselessthing.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,theCertificateCrazerequiresustogetmoreknowledge.Themoreknowledgewehave,thebetterlifewe’llhave.Buttosomedegree,theCertificateCrazealsomakesbadeffectiononus.Itmakesuswastthetimetodosomethingwedon’tneed.WeshouldhaveacorrectattitudetowardstheCertificateCraze.
5分
Currently,alargenumberofnationalfolksespeciallystudentsinuniversitieshaveamazedwiththecertificatecrazesuchlikeGRE,CETandothertech-classcertificatecraze.Seemingly,alargepartofpeoplearelikethosecrazes.
Actually,theyhavenotsameaimstotakepartinthisissue.Somestudentswanttodigmajorinothercountry,sotheyhavetopasssometestssuchlikeGRE.However,somestudentsinsomeextentwanttohuntagoodinvaritykindsoffields.Theyhavetogetthecertificationforamorefruitfuljob.
Frommyindividualpart,weshouldbewisedtoselectoneeffentientcertificatecrazetopass.Moreover,acertificationislessimportantthanyourgenuineabilityinsocial.Wemustknowtheimportanceofabilitybutnotthecertificationonhand.Afterall,weworktouseintelligenceandexperience,notacertification.Ibelievethatwewillmasterourgoalsifwehavegenuineintelligenceandability.Itisnotnecessarytogetacertificationtokillmoretime.Crazeiscraze,abilityisabilityactually.
2分
Howdoyoucettestlastweek?
Thisquestionisfullofourdailylifeeverywhere.Intoday’ssociety,havesomemanykindsofcertificate,thecertificateisveryusedtous.Onadditionofthatpeoplethinkthecertificatecrazesforthestandedtocheckstudent’spower.
Peopleisinterestedofthecertificatecrazehavemanydifferentpurposes.Somestudentsthinkfindagoodjobmaybeoneoftheseneed,theycanusedthecertificategotoagoodschooloruniversity.Othersthinkifgetmorecertificatecrazs,moreoppresiatefromotherstudentsandteacherscome.CertificatecanhelpuseandlettheotherpeopleknowuswhatcanIdoandwhatarewehave.
Inmyopinion,Ithinkthecertificatecrazeisnotsonecessarytoacollegestudents.,manystudentswanttogettoomuchcertificatecrazesothattheysacrificemanystudytimetoresearchthetestswhichcangettheiracertificatecraze.AndIthinkweshouldsetupanewidelofcertificatecraze,whichnotseemthecertificatecrazeastheonlysymboltocaculnateAsweknownastudent.
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体例说明:
斜体与标准答案不同,但可以接受,不扣分
^缺少部分无关紧要的信息,但不影响理解,不扣分
下划线有错误,须扣分
^信息不全,须扣分
8题
Totackletheproblemofgraduationgap,theUniversityofWisconsin-Madisonhelpsminoritystudentsgetoverthestereotypethat______.(theyarelessqualified)
[1分]
1.thattheyarelessqualified
2.(the)minoritystudentsarelessqualified
[0.5分]
1.that/therearelessqualified(局部信息有误)
2.theyarenotqualified(意思不确切)
3.^lessqualified(信息不全)
[0分]
1.qualified(信息错误)
2.theyhavepouredresourcesintopeercounseling(信息错误)
9题
Foryears,privatecollegessuchasPrincetonandMIThaveprovidedminoritystudentswith______duringthesummerbeforefreshmanyear.(preparatorycourses)
[1分]
1.somepreparatory/preparationcourses
2.preparatorycoursesoncampus
[0.5分]
1.prepare/preparingcourses(语言错误)
2.givingthemsomepreparatorycourses(语言错误)
3.somepreparatorycourse(意思不确切)
4.preparatorycoursesontocampus(语言错误)
5.campusandpreparatorycourses(多余信息)
[0分]
1.scholarships(信息错误)
2.bringingminoritiesontocampus(信息错误)
3.accesstocampus(信息错误)
10题
WashingtonandLeeUniversityiscitedasanexampletoshowthatthegapofgraduationratesbetweenwhitesandminoritiescan______.(beclosed)
[1分]
1.beclosedwitheffortandmoney
2.beeliminated/erased/removed
3.disappear/vanish
[0.5分]
1.becontrolled/diminished/decreased/minimized/reduced(意思不确切)
2.closed(语言错误)
3.besmaller(意思不确切)
[0分]
1.havedippedto63%by2007(信息错误)
2.beequal/thesame(信息错误)
复合式听写评分原则及标准
一、复合式听写要求学生在听懂短文的基础上,用听到的原文填写空缺的单词,以及用听到的原文或用自己的语言正确地补全所缺信息。
二、给分标准:
1、36题到43题每题为0.5分。
拼写完全正确的总记给0.5分;凡有拼写错误一律不给分,大小写错误忽略不计。
2、44题至46题每题满分为2分。
答出第一和第二部分内容且语言正确各得1分;完全没有答对问题得0分。
3、阅44题至46题时,应首先判断填入的词语是否能表达原文的意思,如意思完全相反或意思曲解,即使结构和拼写正确也不给分。
三、扣分标准:
1、44题至46题中凡语言错误扣0.5分。
每题语言错误扣分不超过0.5分,凡不得分部分如有语言错误不再重复扣分。
2、44题至46题中,凡有与题目无关的信息扣0.5分;凡信息不全或局部信息有误,扣0.5分。
3、44题至46题中如出现大小写、标点符号错误或明显属于笔误但不影响辩认的拼写错误,均不扣分。
体例说明:
斜体与标准答案不同,但可以接受,不扣分
^缺少部分无关紧要的信息,但不影响理解,不扣分
下划线有错误,须扣分
^信息不全,须扣分
44题
Whohadundertakenthemostexhaustivesearch(1point)wouldbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision(1point)
[2分]
1.whohadundertakenthemostexhaustivesearcheswouldbetheonesmostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions
2.whohaveundertakenthemostexhaustivesearchwillbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision
[1.5分]
1.whohadundertakenthemostexhaustivesearchwouldbethemostsatisfactionwiththefinaldecision(语言错误)
2.whoundertakethemostexhausted/exhaustingsearcheswillbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions(语言错误)
3.whohadundertakenthemost^searchwouldbe^mostsatisfiedwiththeirfinal^decisions(信息不全)
4.whohadundertookthemostexhaustedsearchwouldbe^mostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions(语言错误)
5.whohaveconsideredeverypossibleoptionwillbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision(意思不确切)
[1分]
1.whohadundertaken^mosttriedworkwillbethemostsatisfiedin/about/at/duringthefinaldecision(局部信息有误,语言错误)
2.whohaveundertakenthemostexhaustedsearchwillbethemostsatisfiedinmakingtheirfinaldecisions(语言错误,局部信息有误)
3.whohasundertakenthemostdetailresearchwouldbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions(语言错误,局部信息有误)
4.whohadtaken^mostexhaustedresearcheswouldbe^mostsatisfiedwith^finaldecisions(信息错误)
5.whohadundertakenalltheoptionswouldbethemostsatisfied^(局部信息有误,信息不全)
[0.5分]
1.whoundertakingthemostexhaustedsearchwouldmakethemostsatisfieddecision(语言错误,信息错误)
2.whotakeafterthejob-huntingresearchmay^moresatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision(信息错误,语言错误)
[0分]
1.duringthesurveytheyarenotsatisfiedabouttheirdecisions
2.wouldundertakeajobthattheyfeelmostsatisfied
45题
Whythesepeoplefeellesssatisfiedis(1point)thataworldofpossibilitiesmayalsobeaworldofmissedopportunities(1point)
[2分]
1.whytheyfeellesssatisfiedisthataworldofpossibilitieswillalsobecomeaworldofmissedopportunities
2.whythesepeoplefeellesssatisfiedisthataworldofpossibilitiesmayalsomeanaworldofmissedchances
[1.5分]
1.whythesepeoplefeellesssatisfiedisthataworldofpossibilitiesmayalsobeaworldofless/mixedopportunities(局部信息有误)
2.whythepersonfeelslesssatisfiedisthattheworldofp
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