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I.雅思写作段落展开思路
影响(好处,弊端,作用85%);原因;解决;
II.辩论类题型:
题型A:
双方观点Somepeoplebelievethat…whileothersholdthat…Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion./Whichonedoyouagree?
题型B:
利弊分析Nowadays,moreandmore…Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?
/Isitapositiveoranegativedevelopment?
题型C:
一方观点Somepeoplebelievethat…Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
●四段平衡式写作
●四段一边倒
●五段一边倒
开头段:
背景;点题;表态;
主体段1:
“毫无疑问,…”写出对方理由;
主体段2:
“然而,…”写出我方理由;
结论段:
直接回答问题;复述要点;提出建议;
2006年4月22日发展传统与现代利弊类双方观点Somepeoplebelievethathistoryislittleornothingtopeople.Othersthinkthatpeoplemuststudyhistorytounderstandthepresent.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
Therehaslongbeenheateddebateaboutlearninghistory.Manyindividualsfinditlittleornothingtopeoplewhileothersconsideritadvisableforpeopletolearnhistoryinordertounderstandthepresent.Personally,Iagreewiththeformer.
Indeed,therearereasonsforpeopletosupporthistoricaleducation(forpeopletobelievethatitisnecessarytolearnhistoryinordertounderstandthepresent).Foronething,itimprovespeople’sculturalandnationalidentity.Accordingtoresearch,forinstance,thenationalintegrityinacountrywherethereisalonghistoryismuchstrongerthanthosewhichdonothavethis.Foranother,learninghistoryhelpspeopletohandletheproblemsatpresent.Tobespecific,peoplecandrawlessonsfromthepastand,therefore,avoidrepeatingthemistake.
However,theopinionfromtheothersideoftheargumentsoundsmorereasonabletome.Firstofall,unlikewhattheproponentsareboastingof,theexperienceinthehistorydoesnothelppeopleinpresentsociety.Whathappenedinthepastwasinitsownspecificconditions.Withtheseconditionschanged,itisuselessandevendangerousforpeopletocopywhatwasdonebefore.Besides,somehistoricalrecordsareunreliablethemselves.Justasthesayinggoes,thehistoryiswrittenbythewinner.Therefore,itisinevitablybiasedandmanipulated.Forexample,peoplecanseequitedifferentversionsofhistoryofthesameperiodandeventsfromtheinvadersandthosewhowereconquered.Lastbutnotleast,toomuchemphasisonthepastmightslowdownpeople’spaceofinnovations.Itcouldcausethepublictobetoomuchindulgedinthegloryinthepastwhileignoringmakingthegloryoftheirowntimes.
Inconclusion,Ifirmlybelievethattoomuchimportancehasbeenattachedtolearninghistory.Theexperienceinthepastmightbeobsoleteandmightbewrongandmisleading.Whatismore,toomuchattentiontohistoryisunfavorabletopeople’sinnovativeefforts.
i.开头段:
背景;话题;观点;
●交待背景:
用一句话提出本题的关键词或题目所属类别;把考题中的原因修改后作为背景句;
交待背景的明显误区:
“过大”,“过细”
Sincethepolicyofreformandopeningtotheoutside,lifeinChinahasbeenchangingrapidly.
Humansocietyisundergoingoverwhelmingchanges.
Whethertogivestudentstherighttoevaluateandevencriticizetheirteachersisahighlydebatableissue.Somepeopleholdthatstudentsshouldhavetherighttoevaluateandcriticizetheirteacherswhileothersdonotagree.Personally,thereismoretruthintheformeridea.
Whetherstudentsshouldbegiventherighttoevaluateandevencriticizetheirteachersisahighlydebatableissue.Somepeopleconsiderthispracticeadvisablewhileothersthinktheopposite.Personally,Iagreewiththeformeridea/Asforme,thereismoretruthintheformeridea.
Therehaslongbeenheateddebateabouteducation.Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldbegrantedtherighttocriticizeandassesstheirteacherswhileothersdonotagree.Asforme,thereismoretruthintheformeridea.
Althoughtherearesomedisagreements,Istillbelievethatstudentsshouldhavetherighttoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers.
常用背景句:
●Topicsof…neverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.
Topicsofeducationneverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.
Topicsofchildren’sdoingpaidworkneverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.
Topicsoftheroleofthegovernmentneverfailtodrawpeople’sinterest.
Thefuelpriceshouldbeincreasedtoprotectenvironment.
Topicsofthefuelprice/environmentneverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.
●Nowadays,theprevalence/worseningsituation/rampancyof…arouses/draws/attractswidepublicconcern/attention.(尤其适用问题解决办法类)
Nowadays,theprevalenceofenvironmentalproblemsarouseswidepublicconcern.
Atpresent,theworseningenvironmentalsituationarouseswidepublicattention.
Atpresent,theworseningsituationofpublicsecuritydrawswidepeople’sconcern.
Atpresent,therampancyofcrimedrawswidepublicconcern.
现在汽车的普及引起了广泛的公众关注。
现在,不断恶化的环境形势引起了广泛公众关注。
现在,盗猎行为(poaching)的猖獗引起广泛公众关注。
●Therehaslongbeenheated/spiritualdebateabout…
Therehaslongbeenheateddebateaboutsendingtheelderlytonursinghomes.
Therehaslongbeenheateddebateabouthowtoraisechildrentobegoodsocietymembers.
Therehaslongbeenspiritualdiscussionaboutraisingthefuelpricetoprotectenvironment.
长期以来,关于实施更加严厉的惩罚(harsherpunishment)以减少犯罪存在一个激烈的辩论。
长期以来,关于教孩子们使用电脑有激烈的辩论。
Individualshavesplit/differentideasabout…
Individualshavemixedfeelingstowards…
Individualshavesplitideasaboutairplanes.
Individualshavemixedfeelingstowardsprivatecars.
Individualshavedifferentopinionsaboutadvertisementstowardschildren.
…refersto…
Tele-educationreferstothepracticethatstudentslearnathomewithmoderninformationtechnologieswithoutgoingtothecampus.
Nowadays,theinfluenceof…canbefeltateverycornerofoursociety.
Ourlifeandsocietyhavebeensignificantlychangedby…
Nowadays,theinfluenceofscienceandtechnologycanbefeltateverycornerofoursociety.
Atpresent,…isgainingprevalence/popularityatastaggeringrate.
Nowadays,…isadvancing/developingatanalarmingrate.
Atpresent,internetisgainingpopularityatastaggeringrate.
Nowadays,fashionisadvancingatanamazingrate.
Theissueof…isnotanewone.
Theissueoffightingcrimeisnotanewone.
省略号部分可以填入题干中的关键名词或题目所属类别;
常见题目类别:
education,scienceandtechnology,environment,family,theroleofthegovernment,health,themassmedia,thelaw,publicsecurity,culture,internationaltrade,internationalrelations,theeconomicgrowth,theworldofworking,traveling…
●改题目:
1.替换词:
Somepeoplebelievethat…
Manyindividuals
认为:
believe,think,consider,find,
deem,reckon,assert,argue,suggest,claim,
beconvinced,beconfident,holdthebelief…
Planersnowoftenputbuildingsofthesamefunctionssuchasschools,homesandofficesinseparateareaswhicharefarawayfromeachother.Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?
Inmoderncities,peopleoftenhavetoliveinoneplacebutgotoworkinanotherdistantplace.
2.宾语从句——宾补
从句——分词短语;
去掉连接词;动词+ing;being;
Somepeoplebelievethatprotectingwildanimalsisawasteofthegovernment’smoney.
Manyindividualsfindprotectingwildanimalsawasteofthepublicfund/taxmoney.
情态动词:
Sb.should/would/mustdo…=Itis…forsb.todo…
Somepeoplebelievethat…shoulddo…
Sb.shoulddo…——Itisagoodideaforsb.todo…
Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshoulddopart-timejobs.
Manyindividualsconsiderthatitisagoodideaforstudentstodopart-timejobs.
Manyindividualsconsideritagoodideaforstudentstodopart-timejobs.
Agoodidea/reasonable/fair/advisable/wise/right
Somepeoplebelievethatoldpeopleshouldliveinnursinghouses.
Manyindividualsfindthatitisadvisableforelderlycitizenstoliveinnursinghouses.
Manyindividualsfinditadvisableforelderlycitizenstoliveinnursinghouses.
Ex1.Somepeoplebelievethatschoolsshouldteachthestudentstojudgerightandwrongbutotherssaythatparentsshouldteachit.
Therehaslongbeenheateddebateaboutparentingandschooling.Manyindividualsfindthatitisagoodideaforschoolstoteachthemorallessonwhileothersconsideritabetterideaforparentstoteachit.Personally,Iagreewiththeformer.
Sb.will/woulddo…——Itispossible/likelyforsb.todo…
Somepeoplebelievethatcomputerswillreplacethepublicmuseums.
Manyindividualsfindthatitislikelyforpublicmuseumstobereplacedbycomputers.
Manyindividualsfinditlikelyforpublicmuseumstobereplacedbycomputers.
Sb.mustdo...——Itisnecessaryforsb.todo...
Somepeoplebelievethatwemuststudyhistorytounderstandnow.
Manyindividualsthinkthatitisnecessaryforustostudyhistoryinordertounderstandthepresent.
3.主动——被动
Somepeoplebelievethatthegovernmentshouldspendmoneyprotectingwildanimals.
Manyindividualsholdthatthetaxmoneyshouldbespentprotectingwildanimals.
Manyindividualsfinditreasonablefortaxmoneytobespentprotectingwildanimals.
双方观点:
Ex1.Somepeoplebelievethatparentsshouldencouragechildrentodosomepaidworkbutotherssaythatchildrenshouldconcentrateonstudy.…
Children’sdoingpaidworkisahighlydebatableissue.Manyindividualsconsideritadvisableforkidstobeencouragedtodosowhileothersfinditabetterideaforthemtofocusonstudy.Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformer/latter.
Therehaslongbeenheateddebateabouteducation.Manyindividualsholdthebeliefthatchildrenshouldbeencouragedtodosomepaidworkwhileothersconsideritabetterideaforkidstofocusonstudy.Personally,Iagreewiththeformer/latter.
Itiscommonlyacceptedthatchildrenshouldfocusonstudy.However,thisassertionisbeingchallengedbyanincreasingnumberofpeoplewhoarguethatthekidsshouldbeencouragedtodosomepaidwork.Asforme,thereismoretruthintheformerstatement.
Althoughdoingpaidworkmaybringsomebenefitstochildren,Istillbelie
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