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流程图
流程图6点参考要领:
1.找到流程图的过程,起点,终点。
2.找到图上标出的已知动作,如果出现生词,尽量猜测。
无词,用自己的语言。
3.按照步骤,分段描述,千万不能省略任何一步。
4.切记!
加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词。
5.句型以主动为主,搭配被动,以及主语从句(例如:
Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat…)。
6.时态要使用一般现在时。
Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.(开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacaotree,而是通过主题词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突)【流程图特点之一:
介绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流程图特点之二:
大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句话连接。
】【流程图特点之三:
大量使用被动语态】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.【流程图特点之四:
使用一些表示顺序的连接词】whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.(三个句子的并列:
“句子A,句子Band句子C”。
)Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.【流程图特点之五:
要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。
但是一定要把握尺度,千万不要加上自己的主观观点,否则会扣分】
Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.
Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程图特点之六:
一般不需要写总结】
Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.
Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter.
Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.
Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.
Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthesilkworm.
第一个图显示了,在蚕的生命过程中主要有四步。
Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythe
mothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedson
mulberryleaves.首先,蛾子产出卵,每个卵用10天的时间变成蚕的幼虫,他们以桑叶
为食。
Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilk
threadarounditself.这个阶段持续最多到六个星期,直到幼虫周围生产出茧(silk
thread).Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemerge
fromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.经过三个星期的一段时间之后,
成年的蛾子最终从茧里面出来,这个生命的循环就再一次开始了。
Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.茧是生产
丝绸的原材料。
Onceselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadcanbeseparated
intheunwindingstage.一旦被挑选出来,他们在水里煮沸,丝可以在打开的阶段中被分
离出来。
Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.每条丝是300
到900米长,这就意味着,他们能够被缠绕在一起,染色,然后在织布阶段被用于生产布品。
Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedto
producesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.
范文总结:
1. 163个字。
2. 使用了很多合适的关联词,见阴影部分。
3. 主要是简单的并列句。
4. 句型,搭配了一些被动语态。
5. 动词使用丰富:
produce,feedon,last,emerge,select,boil,separate,unwind,
in10days
duringtheperiodof10days
Theprocesslastsforupto10days
after10days
10dayspasseduntilsomethinghappened.
就这些图形,我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。
地图题注意要点:
1.地图的起始点
2.方向很重要
3.认真阅读并尽量记住图中已有的信息
考察点:
1.方向方位路线顺序的把握
2.相对位置关系的描述和辨别
3.表方位的词或者词组主要是介词的用法
4.图中关键词的定位
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double
2.确定写的顺序,是按变化写还是按位置写,还是两个的综合体。
3.描述变化,把明显的变化先划出,最好用词在图旁边描述,确定
自己要写几点。
4.句型多用被动语态。
5.时态使用一般现在时或者过去时,也可能现在完成时。
表示将来的时间可以用
下列表达:
bepredicted/beexpectedtodo…
一般不用将来时,用上面的结构。
Itisobvious/notable/noticeable
Itiseasytolocate/tofindthat…
Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat…
î 细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
î 语态
地图题用被动语态
A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the east/west/south/north of B
A 在B…..角落
A is at/in the south-eastern corner of B ( at 表示A 在B 外部, in表A 在B 内部)
On the south/southern side of the river
临近马路的地区
The area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the road
î 在道路或河流的最南端
At the southern end of the river
î A 在B 的对面
A is on the opposite side of B
A is opposite B
î A 在B 东部的边界上(A 在B外部)
A is on the eastern border of B
原有事物可说成:
The original/previous/former garden
î 原有事物尺寸上变大/变小:
The size of the library has been enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
î 原有事物在数量上增多或减少:
The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
î 原有事物没了:
The farms completely disappeared/were removed.
î 原有事物被改为:
A becomes B
A is transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turned over to/ into B
图形新添事物
A newly-built road
A new car park was built/established/set up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B
A new IT centre has been added to the library
The year 2000 saw two additions to the land:
a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
选址题并不难写,主要注意两点:
î 位置描述
î 优缺点
这篇文章我们BODY段可分两段,分别陈述:
S1的位置及位置相应的优缺点
S2的位置及位置相应的优缺点
Thebargraphshowstheglobalsales(inbillionsofdollars)ofdifferenttypesofdigitalgamesbetween2000and2006.
Thebarchartcomparestheturnoverindollarsfromsalesofvideogamesforfourdifferentplatforms,namelymobilephones,online,consolesandhandhelddevices,from2000to2006.
Itisclearthatsalesofgamesforthreeoutofthefourplatformsroseeachyear,leadingtoasignificantriseintotalglobalturnoveroverthe7-yearperiod.Salesfiguresforhandheldgameswereatleasttwiceashighasthoseforanyotherplatforminalmosteveryyear.
In2000,worldwidesalesofhandheldgamesstoodataround$11billion,whileconsolegamesearnedjustunder$6billion.Nofiguresaregivenformobileoronlinegamesinthatyear.Overthenext3years,salesofhandheldvideogamesrosebyabout$4billion,butthefigureforconsolesdecreasedby$2billion.Mobilephoneandonlinegamesstartedtobecomepopular,withsalesreachingaround$3billionin2003.
In2006,salesofhandheld,onlineandmobilegamesreachedpeaksof17,9and7billiondollarsrespectively.Bycontrast,turnoverfromconsolegamesdroppedtoitslowestpoint,ataround$2.5billion.
ThemapshowsthegrowthofavillagecalledChorleywoodbetween1868and1994.
Itisclearthatthevillagegrewasthetransportinfrastructurewasimproved.Fourperiodsofdevelopmentareshownonthemap,andeachofthepopulatedareasisneartothemainroads,therailwayorthemotorway.
From1868to1883,Chorleywoodcoveredasmallareanexttooneofthemainroads.ChorleywoodParkandGolfCourseisnowlocatednexttothisoriginalvillagearea.Thevillagegrewalongthemainroadtothesouthbetween1883and1922,andin1909arailwaylinewasbuiltcrossingthisareafromwesttoeast.Chorleywoodstationisinthispartofthevillage.
TheexpansionofChorleywoodcontinuedtotheeastandwestalongsidetherailwaylineuntil1970.Atthattime,amotorwaywasbuilttotheeastofthevillage,andfrom1970to1994,furtherdevelopmentofthevillagetookplacearoundmotorwayintersectionswiththerailwayandoneofthemainroads.
--bySimon
Itisclearthattherearefivedistinctstagesinthisprocess,beginningwiththecaptureofenergyfromsunlight.Thefinaltwostepsshowhowdomesticelectricityisconnectedtotheexternalpowersupply.
Atthefirststageintheprocess,solarpanelsontheroofofanormalhousetakeenergyfromthesunandconvertitintoDCcurrent.Next,thiscurrentispassedtoaninverter,whichchangesittoACcurrentandregulatesthesupplyofelectricity.Atstagethree,electricityissuppliedtothehomefromanelectricalpanel.
Atthefourthstepshownonthediagram,autilitymeterinthehomeisresponsibleforsendinganyextraelectricpoweroutsidethehouseintothegrid.Finally,ifthesolarpanelsdonotprovideenoughenergyforthehousehold,electricitywillflowfromtheutilitygridintothehomethroughthemeter.
∙distinctstages
∙finalsteps
∙atthe...stage
∙asignificantrise
∙overa/theperiod
Collocationsforspecifictopics:
∙produceelectricity
∙thecaptureofenergy
∙takeenergy,convertenergy
∙globalturnover
∙salesfigures,worldwidesales
ThechartandgraphbelowgiveinformationaboutsalesandsharepricesforCoca-Cola.
Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.
∙Youshouldwriteatleast150words.
∙Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.
modelanswer:
ThepiechartshowstheworldwidedistributionofsalesofCoca-Colaintheyear2000andthegraphshowsthechangeinsharepricesbetween1996and2001.
Intheyear2000,Coca-Colasoldatotalof17.1billioncasesoftheirfizzydrinkproductworldwide.ThelargestconsumerwasNorthAmerica,where30.4percentofthetotalvolumewaspurchased.ThesecondlargestconsumerwasLatinAmerica.EuropeandAsiapurchased20.5and16.4percentofthetotalvolumerespectively,whileAfricaandtheMiddleEastremainedfairlysmallconsumersat7percentofthetotalvo
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