Wkecwa英语四级作文范文文档格式.docx
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四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。
内容不跑题即可,注意:
1.不要妄图以情动人;
2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。
结构上牢记总分总:
先写主题句(TopicSentence),再写分论点,最后写总结句(Conclusion)。
语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。
基本表达
人们认为:
itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat
越来越:
beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof
万能理由(Omnipotence)
1.方便:
convenient/convenience
2.效率:
efficient/efficiently/efficiency
3.节省和浪费:
savetime/money/space;
economical,thrift
wastetime/money/space;
costly,lavish
4.人的心理健康:
independent,cooperative,competitive,
considerate,confident,creative,sociable,
perseverance;
selfish,isolated,conserative
5.人的身体健康:
health,disease,strong,strength,energetic
6.娱乐:
colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax
tired,boring,lonely
7.环境:
environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty
8.安全和危险:
safe,danger,risk
9.经验:
experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety
10.人际:
humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely
写完之后修改注意:
(内容方面尽量不要修改)
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数
实例一
题目:
Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲:
(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及
(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途
Score:
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BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.
Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.
Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.
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BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.
注:
1.第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。
2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。
3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。
Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.
1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。
2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于
3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感,信号词
4.cheap便宜,最好用inexpensive
5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处(万能理由)
6.Moreover表示递进
Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.
promising有前途的apromisingyoungman
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Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.
第一句应该用therebe结构
Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.
IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.
I、对比观点选择题:
1.有人认为……;
2.另外一些人认为……;
3.谈谈你的观点和看法。
(最好写成4段)
实例二99年6月真题
ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?
Outline:
1.有人认为读书要有
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