托福TPO独立写作写作分析.docx
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托福TPO独立写作写作分析
托福TPO独立写作--写作分析
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2)beasextensiveorwell-equippedaslibraries.
3)2) payeveryyeartokeepitscollectionwellorganizedandup-to-date.Newfacilitiesareexpensivetobuyandmaintain.well-trainedstaffandworkingextraduringexamperiodinlibthansports.
4)3) studentsarehappytoorganizetheirownsportingeventsandexerciseroutinesquiteindependentlyoftheschool.
习作:
Asuniversitiesandcollegesaremorethanschoolswhichprovideknowledgeandresearchdevicesforstudents,theymayalsoputsportsandsocialactivitiesatthesameimportantpositionasclassesandlibrariesandshouldprovideequalfinancialsupport.Bydoingthis,thestudentscangainbetterhealthcondition,meetmorefriendsandwillabsolutelybebetteradaptedinthesocietyinthefuture.
Tobeginwith,itisnodoubtthatthestudentswilllearnbetteriftheyhaveabetterphysicalcondition.WhileHealthisnowadaysacriticalproblemaroundcampus:
Eyeproblems,vertebratediseasesandoverweightingarethreeserioushealthproblemsallbecauseoflessofexercisesandstayinginside.Moststudentsprefertostayintheirdormitorytoplaycomputerratherthangoouttotakeexercise,sincetheycomplainthereisnotenoughgymorsportsplaygroundforthem.Andtheresultofthishabitisthatmostofthestudentsarewearingthickglasses,sufferingfromcervicalproblems,overweightingandtheirbodiesaremorevulnerabletodiseases.Soinmyopinion,itistheuniversities’responsibilitytomakesuretheirstudentsspendenoughtimeoutsidetheirdormitories,classroomsandthelibraries.Aslongasagoodhealthybodyistheprerequisitetotakingclasses,gymsandsportsplaygroundareneededinalluniversitiesandcollegeswhichdeservesequalfinancialsupport.
Inaddition,tomypointofviewuniversitiesandcollegesarethebestplacetomakefriendswiththesamevalueanddream.Andthebestwaytomakefriendsintheuniversitiesistotakepartinsportsandsocialactivities.Ifyoulikeplayingfootball,theteammembersmaybetheonewiththesamehabitsandlifegoals;Ifyoulovedancing,youmayfindtheonewiththesamevalueandcharacteristicsintheball.Asweallcannotsuccesswithoutthehelpofotherpeople,itisimportantforanyofthestudentstofindtheoneoronesduringtheircollegetime.Andatthispointofviewsportsandsocialactivitiesneedtogettheequalfinancialsupport.
Moreover,sincemostoftheuniversitystudentswillfinallyfindjobsandbemembersofthesociety,itisverynecessaryforthemtogettrainedaboutsocialskills.Thesewillbenefitthestudentsontheirfuturecareerassameastheirprofessionalskills.Theabilitiesofcommunication,organization,cooperationandcreationshouldbetrainedinuniversitiesandcolleges.Sportsandsocialactivitiesarethebestplaceforallofthesetobelearnedandpracticed.Duringhelpingorganizingasportsgame,allthevolunteersgetchancetopracticetheirabilitytosolveurgentproblems,communicatewithothers,andfulfilltheirresponsibilitiesandsoon.Sincealltheseactivitiesneedmonetarysupport,astheexpenditurewillbeaslargeastheclassesandlibraries,theyshouldbeequaltreated.
Allinall,sportsandsocialactivitiesareasimportantasclassesandlibrariesatuniversitiesandcolleges,andtheyshouldalsoreceiveequalfinancialsupport.
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类似题目
T147Thebestwaytheschoolspendsagiftofmoney
Yourschoolhasreceivedagiftofmoney.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwayforyourschooltospendthismoney?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.
(建图书馆or建体育设备)
T167Shouldschoolbuycomputersorbooks?
Yourschoolhasenoughmoneytopurchaseeithercomputersforstudentsorbooksforthelibrary.Whichshouldyourschoolchoosetobuy—computersorbooks?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourrecommendation.
(买书)
2.人品问题
2.1诚实
TPO2Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.
范文提纲:
反对,
主题句isincreasinglydoubted,tellingthetruthisnotalwaysthebestpolicy
1)1)thetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeaverynicethingtobothhearandsay.Whitelie,Advertising,Dressing
2)2)Unarguably,hiding(entirelyorparticularly)thetruthinsomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.Spy.Confrontationsanddisputescanseeminglybeavoided.politician,historian
支持,
Honestismostimportantvirtue.
Liewillsoonerorlaterbeunfolded.Andthetruthwillhurtbothsides.
Dishonestywillleavebadinfluenceamongothers.
【范文1】
Therearecertainconsiderationsorfactorsthateveryonetakesintoaccountinarelationship.
Peoplemaylookforhonesty,altruism,understanding,loyalty,beingthoughtfuletc!
Everyonewouldmoreorlesswishthatthepersons/heisdealingwith,hassomeofthesevirtuesabove.Puttingtheminanorderaccordingtotheirimportance,howevercanbeverysubjectiveandrelative.
Whensomeoneaskshim/herselfthequestion“WhatdoIconsidertobethemostimportantthinginmyrelationship?
”theanswerdependsonalotoffactorssuchashowhis/herearlierrelationshipswere.
Afterstatingthateveryone’sopinioncanbedifferentaboutthis,formehonesty,inotherwords,alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinarelationship.Oppositeofthisisinarguablylyingandifsomeoneneedstolie,eithers/heishidingsomethingorisafraidoftellingmesomething.
Inanyrelationshipofmine,Iwouldwishthatfirstofall,thepersonI’mdealingwithishonest.Eventhoughs/hethinksthats/hedidsomethingwrongthatIwouldn’tlike,s/he’dbettertellmethetruthandnotlieaboutit.LateronifIfindoutaboutalieorhearthetruthfromsomeoneelse,that’dbemuchmoreunpleasant.InthatcasehowcanIeverbelieveortrustthatpersonagain?
HowcanIeverbelievethatthispersonhasenoughconfidenceinmetoforgivehim/herandcarryonwiththerelationshipfromthere.SoifIcannottrustapersonanymore,ifthepersondoesn’tthinkIcanhandlethetruth,there’snopointtocontinuingthatrelationship.
AlthoughIwouldliketoseealtruistic,understanding,thoughtfulandloyalbehaviorfrompeople,aninstanceoftheoppositeofthesebehaviorswouldnotupsetmeasmuchasdishonestywould.Amongallthepossiblebehaviors,dishonestyistheonlyoneformethatterminateshowIfeelaboutaperson’sreliability.Thereforehonestywouldbemyfirstconcernandthemostimportantconsiderationinarelationship.
【范文2】
Thetraditionalvirtueoftellingthetruthinallsituationsisincreasinglydoubtedbymanyintoday’sworld.Manybelievethattellingthetruthisnotalwaysthebestpolicywhendealingwithpeople.Moreover,thelineofa“truth”isbecomingvaguer.Thisessaywillexploretheimportanceoftellingthetruthinrelationshipsbetweenpeople.
Weallunderstandthatoftenthetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeaverynicethingtobothhearandsay.Liesorwhiteliesoftenhavetheiradvantages.Themanipulationofwhiteliesisthemostobviousthebusinessworld.Howmanytimeshaveweheardthatsomeproductis“thefinest”or“thecheapest”?
howmanytimeshaveweheardthatproductshavesuchandsuch“magicalfunctions”?
advertisingisaboutpersuasion,andmanywouldagreethatifacompanyistotelltheabsolutetruthaboutit’sproducts,noonewouldbeinterestedinevenhavingalookattheproducts.
Thesamelogicappliestohumanrelationships.Ifyourfriendhadwornanewlypurchaseddressonherbirthdayandenergeticallyaskedyouifitwasaworthybuy,wouldyoufreelyexpressyouropinionthatyouhadneverseenadressastheoneshe’scurrentlywearing?
Andspoilherbirthday?
Unarguably,hiding(entirelyorparticially)thetruthinsomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.Confrontationsanddisputescanseeminglybeavoided.
However,thereisalwaystheriskfactorofthetruthemergingsoonerorlaterwhentellinganuntruth.Thebasictrustinanyrelationships(businessman/customer,friends,parents/children)willbeblotched,andwouldhaveanimpactonthefuturerelationshipbetweenbothparties.Thestoryofthe“theboywhocriedwolf”fullyillustratestheconsequencesoftellinguntruths.Noonewillbelieveyouwhenyou’retellingthetruth.Yourwordwillhavenoweighting.
Inaddition,another“badfactor”oftellinguntruthsisthatyouhaveabsolutelynocontroloverwhenthetruth(ofpreviousuntruths)willemerge.Untruthsbreedpaininbothparties:
tearswhenthetruthisuncoveredafteraperiodoftime;fearandtheburdenofsharinga“secret”.Inthelongrun,itseemsthathidingthetruthisnotbeneficialtoeitherparty.
Everyonehatesbetrayal.Evenifitisthetrendtooccasionallyhidethetruthinrelationships,itisstronglyrecommendedthatnottofollowthattrendastheriskandtheconsequencesofthetruthunfoldedoverwhelmstheminimaladvantagesonecanderivefromnottellingthetruthAfterall,itisunderstoodthatrelationshipsarefoundedon“trust”whichgoeshandinhandwith“truth”.Indeedtellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Always.
习作:
Itisundoubtedthat,tellingthetruthisveryimportantforinteractionbetweenpeople.However,itisnotalwaysgoodtosaythetruthunderanycircumstances.Therearemanysituationswhenalieisbetter.Mypointofviewisstatedbelow.
Tobeginwith,itisnogoodtellingtheterribletruthtopeoplewhoareinbademotionorill.Imagingthat,afriendofyoursishavingcancerandwillnotlastformorethan3weeks.Isitbettertotellhimorherthatitisonlyalittleproblemwithhisorherbodyandtrytomakeh
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