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四六级写作二八法则
四六级写作二八法则
第一章语言写作技巧
一、词汇变化
衡量一个人写作能力的高低,很大程度上可以从其对同一意思有多少种表达方式上来判断。
同一意思掌握的表达方工越多,文章就越引人入胜。
例1:
如果表示“使”,不要仅靠make:
a.Thissocietystillmakeswomenunabletoenjoyequalrights.
b.Womenarestilldeniedequalright.
a.Thephotomademerecallmychildhood.
b.Thephotoremindedmeofmychildhood.
a.Theincidentalwaysmakesmefeelpainful.
b.Theincidentisasourceofpaintome.
例2:
如要表达“越来越……”,不要只使用moreandmore:
a.MoreandmorestudentsfindlearningEnglishhasbecomemoreandmoreimportant.
b.StudentsingrowingnumbersfindlearningEnglishhasbecomeincreasinglyimportant.
a.Peopleconsumemoreandmorevegetablesnowadays.
b.Vegetableconsumptionisontherisenowadays.
a.Moreandmoreservicepeoplearedemandedwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.
b.Thereisanincreasingdemandforservicepeoplewiththedevelopmentofeconomy.
a.Moreandmoreevidencesuggeststhatthesecondstyleofmanagementismoreproductivethanthefirststyleofmanagement.
b.Theevidenceismountingthatthesecondstyleofmanagementismoreproductivethanthefirststyleofmanagement.
a.Henoticedthereweremoreandmorewomencontractingthevirusandmoreandmoretransmissionsthroughsex.
b.Henoticedahighernumberofwomencontractingthevirusandalargerproportionoftransmissionsthroughsex.
例3:
如果表达“大多数”,不要一昧用most:
a.MostpeopleprefertowatchTVathomeratherthangoouttoseethefilm.
b.ThevastmajorityofpeopleprefertowatchTVathomeratherthangoouttoseethefilm.
a.Mostpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferentkinds.
b.Asizablepercentageofpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferentkinds.
a.Mostpeopleindevelopedcountriesappreciateahighstandardofliving.
b.Aconsiderableproportionofpeopleindevelopedcountriesenjoyhighstandardofliving.
例4:
如果要表达“不仅……,而且……”,不要只用notonly...butalso:
a.Mankindisofapiecenotonlybiologicallybutalsophysiologically.
b.Mankindisofapiecebiologicallyaswellasphysiologically.
a.Takingapart-timejobcannotonlyearnalittlemoney,butalsoanopportunitytocontactwithsociety.
b.Takingapart-timejobmeansmorethanalittlemoneyyoucanearn.Italsomeansanopportunitytocontactwithsociety.
a.Manypeoplereadbooksnotonlyforenjoymentbutalsoforcompanionship.
b.Manypeoplereadbooksasmuchforenjoymentasforcompanionship.
例5:
表达“很重要”,还可能用不及物动词count:
a.Heropinionisimportantbecauseofherexperience.
b.Heropinioncountsbecauseofherexperience.
接下来的作业:
2002年12月四级及六级作文
ItPaystoBeHonest
Direction:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:
ItPaystoBeHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.
1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利已,做人应该诚实。
(二)主语变化
主语必须要符合英美等西方人的思维习惯。
中国自古以来就有“天人合一”的观点,强调人和自然的浑然一体,因此中文习惯以人作主语。
而英语强调客观,主语以物或抽象概念居多。
因此,当我们要讲述一个经验性的事实或者常理时,不要过多使用“Ithinkthat",议论文中过多使用“I”容易影响文章的客观性。
使用非人称主语就可以解决这个问题。
非人称主语,即没有生命的东西充当主语。
下面是四种常用的主语变换形式及其典型例句和句型:
(1)物称主语
1.TheconstantchangeofthecourseoftheChangjiangRiverinhistoryhelpedformagreatmanylakesintheareasaroundWuhan.
在历史上,由于长江不断改道在武汉地区形成了众多的湖泊。
2.Anideasuddenlystuckher.
她突然想到了一个主意。
3.Fromthemomentweenteredthehouse,careandkindnesssurroundedusoneveryside.
一进这个房子,我们就随时随地承受到关怀与照顾。
4.Thetruthfinallydawnedonthegirl.
这个女孩最终明白了真相。
(2)it当主语
1.It'srainingcatsanddogs.
正在下倾盆下雨。
2.Itneveroccurredtomethathewasamanwhoputpersonalgainaboveallelse.
我从来没想到他是一个把个人利益看得比什么都重要的人。
3.Itishoped/anticipatedthatwecancommunicatewitheachotherwellandestablishfriendshipsoon.
希望我们能好好交流并迅速建立友谊。
(3)there+系动词结构
1.Thereseemstobenodoubtaboutit.
此事似乎确定无疑。
2.Thereoncelivedapoorfarmerwhohadfoursons.
从前有一个穷苦的农夫,他有4个儿子。
3.Therecomesatimewhendyingseempreferabletostayingalive.
有的时候觉得死了似乎比活着好。
4.Thereisbroadconsensus(ofopinion)inthecountryonthisissue.
对这一问题举国上下(舆论)一致。
5.Inthepastdecadetherehasbeenamarkeddecreaseinthenumberofyoungmarriedcoupleswhowanttohavechildren.
过去几十年里,婚后不要小孩的夫妇明显增多。
(4)时间、地点名词作主语
时间、地点名词作主语是英语中常见的用法,是地道的英语表达方式,常用see,witness,find等词作谓语。
1.Shanghaifirstsawtheriseofthemovement.
这个运动首先在上海兴起。
2.Thelittletownhaswitnessedmanygreatchanges.
这个小镇发生了许多重大的变化。
(例文)
ItPaystoBeHonest
Asisknowntoall,"Itpaystobehonest".Dishonestycanresultinguiltyfeelings,causedistrustamongpeopleandevenruinyourreputationalthoughbeinghonestymaygetyouintotroubleorhurtsomeoneinsomecases.
However,dishonestyisrampantinoursociety.Inthefirstplace,manymerchantscoaxthecustomerstobuyfakecommodities.TakemyneighborXiaoWangasanexample.HeboughtaTVsetwith2,000yuanaweekago,butnowitdoesn'tworkatall.Inthesecondplace,somestudentscheatonexamsinordertopasstheexamsorachievescholarships.Lastbutnotleast,manyrenownedpeoplecheatthegovernmentbyevadingtaxes.
Onthecontrary,honestynotonlybringsushonorandfriendship,butalsomaterialgains.Tobeginwith,ifwearehonest,wecanearnothers'trust,whichinturngivesusself-respectaswellassocialcompanionship.Sotosumup,itdoespaytobehonest.
写作套路分析
黄金模板一
Although...,...isstillprevalentinoursociety.Forexample,...
Thosewho....Asaresult,....Ontheotherhand,...
Bycontrast,....Besides,....Sowecansaythat....
Allmentionedabovetellsusthatitishightimethatwetookactionto....Butonethingwehavetonoticeisthat....Inshort,....
黄金模板二
Asisknowtoall,.......canresultin...,cause...andeven...although...insomecases.
However,....Inthefirstplace,....Take...asanexample.Inthesecondplace,....Lastbutnotleast,.......isagoodcaseinpoint.
Onthecontrary,...notonly...,butalso....Tobeginwith,....Sotosumup,....
黄金模板三
Nowadayseveryoneofushasbeenconfrontedwithtoomanyinstanceof....Wecan'thelpaskingourselves:
...?
...,shouldandwouldnevergooutofstyle.Ontheotherhand,....Ontheotherhand,....
Allthreathasbeendiscussedabovepointstoanundeniablefactthat....
今天作业:
2000年6月四级及六级作文
IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?
Direction:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:
IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?
Thefirstsentencehasalreadybeenwrittenforyou.Youshouldwriteatleast120-150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:
1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……
2.也有人持不同意见,……
3.我的看法和打算是……
AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponentoftheCollegeEnglishTest(CET).
例文:
AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponentofCollegeEnglishTest.Manypeoplebelieveit'sverynecessarytotakesuchatest.Tobeginwith,asabasicpartofthelanguage,spokenEnglishisgettingmoreandmoreimportantinthisinformationage.Onewon'tachievemuchintheinterculturalcommunicationunlessonecanexpressoneselfwell.Inotherwords,fluentEnglishisanindicationofone'smasteryofthelanguage.Therefore,atestoughttobedesignedtoassessone'slevelofspokenEnglish.
However,somepeopledon'tthinkitnecessarytotakesuchatest.Theyholdthatwrittenexamisenoughtoindicateone'scomprehensiveEnglishlevel.Solongasonedoesn'twanttostudyabroadorcooperatewithforeignersinforeignenterprisesorcompanies,oneneedn'tworryabouttakingsuchatest.BecausewrittenEnglishenablesstudentsnotonlytoreadreferencebooksbutalsoworkonInternet.Therefore,intheiropinion,atestofspokenEnglishwillonlyaddtothestudents'burdenofsudyandthusit'svitalforstudentstotakeit.
Ibelieveit'sverynecessaryforstudentstotakeit.Ontheonehand,suchatestwillstimulatestudentstoimprovetheiroralEnglish.Ontheotherhand,itwillhelpmakestudentsmorecompetentinthefiercecompetition,andpushtheirEnglishtoahigherlevel.Tosumup,withChina'sentryintotheWTOandthearrivalofknowledgeeconomyage,it'smoreandmoreimportantforstudentstoimprovetheiroralEnglish.Therefore,atestofspokenEnglishisnotonlynecessarybutalsovitallyimportant.
作业
2000年1月四级及六级作文
HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:
HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcomposition(giveninChinese)below:
1.上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可能通过多种途径解决.
2.哪种途径适合我?
(说明理由)
HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation
PreviouslyinChina,auniversityeducationwasfundedbythegovernment.Nowadays,thingshavechangedandstudentsmustnowfinancetheirowneducation.Asaresult,studentsarenowfacedwiththeproblemhowtheycanpayforthecollegeeducation.
Thereareseveralpossiblewaystoraisethemoneytopayfeesandtuition.First,parentsareasourceforcollegefunding,asisthecasewithmoststudents.Second,scholarshipsarealsoavailableforstudentswithoutstandingacademicperformance.Third,bankscanprovideloanstostudentswhoneedthemwithoutcollateral.Andmanystudentscantakepart-timejobstohelpfinancetheireducation.IncitiessuchasBeijingandShanghai,therearemanypart-timejobopportunitiesforstudentsbothonandoffcampus.
Personally,Ibelieveascholarshipisthebestwaytofundmyeducationasitnotonlypaysfeesandtuition,butalsoencouragesmetostudyhard.Allinall,weshouldchooseasuitablewaytofinanceour
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