雅思英语作文better parents女性比起男性是更好的父母女性在抚养孩子方面有着更大作用吗.docx
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雅思英语作文betterparents女性比起男性是更好的父母女性在抚养孩子方面有着更大作用吗
Manypeoplebelievethatwomenmakebetterparentsthanmenandthatiswhytheyhavethegreaterroleinraisingchildreninmostsocieties.Othersclaimthatmenarejustasgoodaswomenatparenting.Whocanbethebetterparent?
MenorWomen?
ModelAnswer1:
(NeutralArgument)
Parentalresponsibilitiesandrolesareveryimportantfortheparentstomaketheirchildrenpreparedforthefuture.Thewayafatherormothertreatsachildaffectsgreatlyforhis/herfuturegrowthbothmentallyandphysically.Ifparentsfailtotakegreatcareoftheirchildren,thenthosechildrenmightgoastrayandwillclaimtheirparentsfortheirmisfortune.Everymotherandfatherlovehisorherchildrenmorethananythinginthisworldandtheyexpectthemtobegreatpersonsandwellestablishedinfuture.Throughoutthehumanhistory,mothersmainlytakecareofthechildrenanddomostoftheworksforthechildren.Onthecontrary,menaremainlybusyoutsidethehometoearnthelivingforthewholefamily.
Thisisnottosaythatmenarenotofimportanceinchildrencaringandtheydonotknowtheirkids.Theyaremostnecessaryifchildrenaretoappreciatefullytherolesofbothsexes.Butwomenhaveproventhemselvessuperiorparentsasaresultoftheircondition,theirlessaggressivenaturesandtheyaregenerallybettertocommunicatewithkids.Menremainbusyattheirworksandhavetostayoutsidethehomemostofthetime,butwomenhavelotsofsparetimestosharewiththeirchildren.Fromthetimetheyarelittlegirls,femaleslearnaboutnurturing.Firstwithdollsandlaterperhapswithyoungerbrothersandsisters;girlsaregiventheroleofcareer.Girlsseetheirmothersinthesamerolesandsoitisnaturalthattheyidentifythisasafemaleactivity.Boys,incontrast,learncompetitiverolesfarremovedfromwhatitmeanstonurture.Whileboysmaydreamofadventures,girls'conditioningmeanstheytendtoseethefutureintermsofraisingfamilies.Girlsalsoappeartobelessaggressivethanboys.Inadulthood,itismen,notwomen,whoprovetobetheaggressorsincrimeandinwar.Obviously,inraisingchildren,amorepatient,gentlemannerispreferablethanamoreaggressiveone.Althoughtherecertainlyexistsgentlemenandaggressivewomen,byandlarge,femalesarelesslikelytoresorttoviolenceinattemptingtosolveproblems.
Butifweconsiderthatallwomenaregoodfortheirchildrenandmencannotraiseakidproperlythenperhapsitwouldbeapartialjudgment.Isnotthereanyfamilywherethemotherhasdiedornotpresentanditisthefatherwhotakescareofthechildrenaswellasdoesjobsoutside?
Certainly,therearelots.Inthirdworldcountries,fathersarecomparativelymoreeducatedthanthemothersandthetakecareoftheirchildren'seducationgreatly.Achildneedstheaffectionandcaringofbothfatherandmother.
(Approximately597words)
MainquestionofthisIELTSEssay:
A.Dowomenmakebetterparentsthanmenormenarejustasgoodaswomenatparenting?
DiscussionPoints:
Whocanbethebetterparent?
MenorWomen?
Womenarebetterthanmenatparenting:
Mothershaveaclosersensationalrelationshiptotheiroffspringthanfathersbecauseofabetterbondingbetweenthemandtheirchildren.
Womenusuallyspendmoretimewiththeirchildrenthanmenbecause,inmanycountries,theyareusuallylessengagedinworking.
Geneticallywomencanbesociallyactiveandcommunicatebetterwiththeirsurroundingthanthemencan.
Asaroleofmother,motherscantransfertheirexperiencetotheirdaughterstobecomeperfectmothersinthefuture.
Achildspendsmostofthetimes,it'schildhoodwiththemotherandthusmothershaveabetterunderstandingoftheiroffspring.
Geneticallymothershavebetterqualityintakingcareoftheirchildren.
Menarebetterthanwomenatparenting:
Menhavebeenmoreresponsibletotheirfamilyfinancially,sotheycantransfertheirexperiencetotheirchildrenfarbetterthanthewomencan.
Males’hormoneshelpbetterthemtobemoreflexibletodifficultsituationshappeningintheirreallife,andtheycantransfertheirexperiencetotheirboys.
Fathersareusuallymoreseriousinpunishingoftheirchildrenthanmothers,sotheycancontrolbettertheirchildrentoavoidcrime.
Inmanysocieties,fathershavebettereducationalqualificationsanddiverseexperience.That’swhytheycanbetterpreparetheirchildrenforthefuture.
Afathermakesfutureofthechildfinanciallysecure.
Men'scontributiontoachild'sdevelopmentisfoundtobemoreeffectivewhenitcomestoimbibingdiscipline.
Menandwomenhaveequalroletoraisetheirchildren:
Akidneedstheaffectionandcaringofbothfatherandmother.
Whilemotherstakecareoftheirchildren,fathersworkoutsidetobringthemoneyhome.
Theybothhavequalitiesthatshouldbelearnedbytheirkids.
Inmanyfamilies,bothparentsworkoutsideandthat'swhytheresponsibilitiesofupbringingchildrenshouldbeequallyshared.
SampleAnswer2:
(Womenmakebetterparents)
Motherandfatherbothplayacrucialroleintheupbringingofchildren.Somepeopleassertthatwomentriumphovermentomakebetterparents.Incontrarytothis,othersclaimthatmenareasgoodaswomeninparenting.Thisisveryperplexingforanyonetochooseone.Accordingtome,womenmakebetterparents.
Insupportofmypointofview,amotherisoneofthefirstpersonswhogetsattachedtothechildfromthebirth.Achildspendsmostofhistime,hischildhoodwiththemother.Soachildismoreinfluencedbythemother.Secondly,amotheristheonlypersonwhotakesallsortsofcareofthechild,like-feeding,bathingetc.Thus,motheroccupiesmostofthechild'stime.Thismakesastrongbondbetweenthem.Whenachildbecomesalittleolderandstartstogoschool,amothertakescareofthatchild'sstudy,homework,assignment,projectsetc.Bythis,amotherplaysacrucialroleinachild'seducation.Inaddition,achildlearnsmoralvalueswhicharemainingredientstobecomegoodhumanfromthemother.
Inoursociety,usuallywefindthatwomenspendmostofthetimeathomeandmenareonlybreadwinners.Inthistypeofsituation,thepersonwhocanspendachunkofthetimeforthenourishmentofachildisawoman.Thus,womencankeephereyesoneverysmallactivityofchildren.Apartfromthat,owingtocloserrelationshipchildren'ssharesit'semotionsandproblemswiththemotherfirst.Thus,motherknowsherchildbetterthananyone.
Ontheflipside,tomaintainthestatusofmen,theyarguethatmenareasgoodaswomen.Inspiteofspendinglesstimewiththechildamanearnforhischild.Afathermakesfutureofthechildfinanciallysecure.Asfinancialsecurityisasimportantasbuildingchild'spersonality.
Toconclude,bothwomenandmenareequallyimportant.Butinoursocietywomenaresuperiortomeninbetterparentingastheyrearchildverywell.
(Approximately 325 words)
ModelAnswer3:
(Bothmenandwomenhaveanequalrole)
Inordertobeagreathumanbeinginfuture,achildshouldberaisedwithgreatmoralstandardsathome.Thetopicwhetherwomenormengetamajorroleinraisingthechildrenisahugedebatenowadays.Ithinkbothoftheparentsshareequalcreditinraisingkids.Let’sponderontheadvantagesonbothsides.
Primarily,womenareoftentreatedasgreatcaretakersandalsotheoneforgreatfutureofthekids.Childrenspendamajorchunkoftheirtimewiththeirmums.So,womengettoteachkidsonhowtobeabetterpersoninthesocietyandalsoonhowtobeagreathumanbeing.Sheprovidesnutritiousfoodstothechildrenwhichhelpthemtobecomehealthy.Childrenlearnabouthowtotakecareofothersfromtheirmumsbecausemothersalwaystakegoodcareoftheirchildren.Thisinstilsagreatsenseofresponsibilityinthechildren.
Secondarily,men(father)aretermedastheiridealpersonforchildren.Menalwaysstrugglesomuchinordertowinbreadforthefamily.Thisstruggleteacheskidstostudybetterwithadreamtohelpthefamilyfinanciallyinfuture.Fathersareoftenasourceofinspirationforchildrenonhowtobeastrongandbetterpersoninlife.Thishelpsthemtogrowasbetterandresponsiblecitizensinfuture.
Afterlookingatadvantagesfrombothsidesoftheargument,Iconcludethatbothmenandwomenshareequalproportioninraisingthechildren.Eveniftheproportionisnotbalanced,therewillbeahugeimpactonthechildren.Sobothfatherandmothersholdamajorroleinthefamily.
(Approximately 285 words)
SampleAnswer4:
(Bothmenandwomenhaveanequalrole)
Parentingisanextremelyimportantfactorfortheproperupbringingofachild.Whilesomepeopleareoftheopinionthatwomenmakebetterparents,othersthinkthatmencanalsobeeffectiveinparenting. Ibelievethattherecannotbeconclusionsdrawninagenericsenserelatingtothegender–MenorWomen.Whatmattersmostistheonewhohasthequalitiesofbeingagoodparent;thiscanbeeitheramaleorfemale.
Womenbyvirtueofhavingmorepatience,tendtohandlechildrenbetterduringtheirinfancywhenpatienceisanimportantfactor.Ensuringabalancedandnutritiousdietforachildisagaindonebetterbywomen.Forexample,womenareinabetterpositiontounderstandwhatachildneedstotakeinthelunchboxfortheschool.Further,studieshaveindicatedthatimbibingthemorals,valuesandethicsintoachildduringtheirgrowingupyearsisdonebetterbymothers.
Men'scontributiontoachild'sdevelopmentisfoundtobemoreeffectivewhenitcomestoimbibingdiscipline.Thisbecomesimportantasthechild'stimemana
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