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一.典型范例分析
Agreeordisagree/preference
大家再练习作文的时候,一定会有个问题盘旋在你脑海,如果问题是问doyouagreeordisagree…。
或doyoupreferwhichstatementorpoint…。
咱们是该全否定呢?
全赞成的还是中立?
但是如果全否定或全赞成好像又太偏激;中立呢,又跑题了。
如何写好Agreeordisagree/preference题型呢?
最好按照以下格式来写。
对于第一种题型-Agreeordisagree有时确实不好完全否定一个而赞成另个观点,折中的方法就是,点题表明你的立场——支持哪个,然后在文章中稍微带过关于你不同意的观点——其实它也有些优点,不要说得太多。
在结尾时再强调你自己赞成的那个观点。
对于第二个题型-preference,最好只赞成一个写,实在是两个观点之间如果相关很大有很多共同点,都值得人们认为是对的,你也可捎带写一点另个观点的好处,但是着重强调自己的观点。
对于这种题型,好一点的结构是:
第一段:
背景,然后点题,赞成(不赞成)或prefer哪个观点
二:
让步。
用ofcourse,forsure,开头,引出你相反观点里很明显的优点(记住是很明显的,公认的优点),用一两句话写过。
三:
用nevertheless,however,incontrast,等引出你自己的观点,这才是正文。
四:
再加强支持你的观点
五:
结尾。
下面一片文章是按照以上结构写的一篇Agreeordisagree:
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Onlypeoplewhoearnalotofmoneyaresuccessful.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer。
Obviously,amillionairemaybeoneofthesuccessfultycoonswhohavenumerousmoneyandassets.Theymayreadilyswiminthecommercialandpoliticaloceansincetheyarerichandpowerful.However,itissuperficialtosimplysaythatonlypeoplewhoearnmuchmoneyaresuccessful.Onecouldbecomesuccessfulbydoingabigjobifheorshebitesthebulletinworkandcanbewithalittlelucktogettheopportunitytofulfillhisorherdreamormission.
Forsure,somepeoplemayarguethatrichpeoplearepowerful,whoarealsosuccessful.Wehavetoadmitthatmoneyisabletoenrichpeople'sphysicallivesandcanbesavedasincrediblefortunetotheirdescendantswhomayenjoythebrilliantlivesforlongtime.
However,itishardtobelievethatrichpeopleareonlythesamplesorrolemodelsofsuccessfulpeople.SomescientistsasNewtonandEdisonhavecontributednumerouslytotheworldofinternationaldevelopmentinscience,physics,biology,mathematicsandsoon.Mostarenotrichbutsuccessful.Formany,theyspentmostoftheirtimeinthelabstodotheexperimentswhichweretheprocessesthathavebeentransformeddramaticallyfromtheoriestopractices.Theseprocesseshaveunbelievablychangedourlivesandworld.Ontheotherhand,mostscientistsalwayskeepinmindtoapplythefinancialgrantfromthegovernmentsorindividualdonors.So,aretheysuccessfulbecausetheyarerich?
Idonotthinkso.
Moreover,peoplewhoholdmuchmoneymaybecomerespectablebutnotsuccessfulbydoingsomethingmeaningful.Asallweknow,moneyisnotpanacea,however,nowadaysanythingcouldn'tbedonewithoutmoney.Generally,anythingwillbedonemeaningfullywithproperwaysandalovingheart.Forexample,ifpeoplewhoarerichdonateabitoftheirsavingstoHopeSchoolorfinancialinstitutionstohelpthepoorchildrenordisabledpeople,henceitmayilluminatemanychildren'sordisabledpeople'slivesandcareers,andmaytotallychangetheirlives.Probably,someofthesechildrenmightbecomethegreatscientistsorpowerfultycoonsinthefuture.Whoknows?
Asamatteroffact,thosewhohelpthechildrenordisabledpeoplearelovelyandrespectablebutnotsuccessful.
Therefore,itisprettyclearthatIdisagreewiththestatementthatonlypeoplewhoearnalotofmoneyaresuccessful.AsfarasIamconcerned,thevalueofsuccesswillberepresentedbymanysignificantfactors.Moneyisalittlepieceofragofthem,whichcannotbeeitheroveremphasizedorignored.(字数428)
why类型的题,如Peopleattendcollegeoruniversityformanydifferentreasons(forexample,newexperiences,careerpreparation,andincreasedknowledge).Whydoyouthinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer。
1、背景,点题,列举2-3个原因。
列举原因的句子最好是一句话。
2、第一个原因。
3、第二个原因。
4、第三个原因。
5、结尾。
总结前三个原因——用一句话说明。
然后表面自己对此的看法和感受。
下面是一篇根据以上步骤写的文章,供参考。
Withthedevelopmentofsociety,manypeopleareinclinedtogotouniversityinsteadoffindingjobafterhighschool.Amongvariousmotivesthatdrivepeopletoattendcollegeoruniversityarecareerpreparation,increasedacademicknowledgeandnewpre-socialexperiences.
Careerpreparationmaybethemostcommonreasonpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity.Nowadaysthephenomenonofthehigheducationrequirementsfrommanycompaniesisprogressivelyoutstanding.Asisknowntoall,peoplemaygetthebetterjobaftergraduation.Despitethedifficultiesoftheadmissionfromcollegesoruniversities,peoplestillwanttocrossintothedoortogotouniversity.AsthecultureofChina,somestudents,whoarelackofgoodconditionofstudy,attempttogotouniversitylearningmoreknowledgeandgainingmoreopportunitiessincetheyknowthiswaymaybetheonlyandbestpathwhichnotonlyleadstowardtheirbrilliantfuturealsochangestheirlivesentirely.
Academicknowledgecanbemucheasieraccumulatedregularlybylearninginuniversity.Ofcourse,peoplecanlearnknowledgethroughotherwayssuchastolearnontheirown,toreadandevenobserve.However,throughthetraditionalmediaofcollegesoruniversities,theyaretheeasiestandfastestwaystoobtainacademicknowledge.Thismeanstheteachersinuniversities,eitherourinstructorsormentors,areabletoconveytheknowledge,mentallyorphysically,muchmoreefficientthroughtheadequatemethodsthanotherwayssuchasself-study.Thus,peopleincollegeoruniversitycanavoidthemistakesthathappenedbefore,whichcansavetheirmuchmoretimetolearnsomethingelse.
Newacademicexperienceshelppeoplenotonlytoobtainknowledgebutonlytounderstandthesocialrelationshipbeforecontactingsociety.University,infact,isanacademicsocietywhichissmallerthanourregularsociety.However,thecomplicationofrelationshipsbetweenstudentsandteachers,amongclassmates,boysandgirlsisalmostthesameasthatofrelationshipsofourbigwholesociety.Cliquemayoccurinuniversitylikethecommunityorgroupincommonsociety.Teensthathaveinterestsincommonlikespendingtheirtimeinthecliques,mostofwhicharerelatedtomusic,sports,books,orpainting.Theyareverypopularineveryuniversity.Infact,studentswhostayinthecliquesareconsciouslyorsubconsciouslytendtolearnhowtogetalongwithothersbeforeattendingtheregularsociety.
FromthereasonsImentionedabove,itisprettyclearwhypeopleattendcollegeoruniversitythatarecareerpreparation,increasedacademicknowledgeandnewpre-socialexperiences.AsfarasIamconcerned,attendingcollegeoruniversityisaprerequisitepreparationbeforeyoungaremature.Peoplemayaccumulateessentialskillsinuniversitytoavoidsomeevitabletroubles.
二.作文结构
作文文套一
AorB
Dependingonpersonalexperience,personalitytypeandemotionalconcern,wefindthatsomepeopleholdtheideaofAmeanwhileothersprefertoB,frommypointofview,itismoreadvisabletochoseAratherthanB.Myargumentsforthispointarelistedasfollows.
ThemainreasonformypropensityforAisthat___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.Forinstance,____________________
Anotherreasoncanbeseenbyeveryoneisthat____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________Forexample,____________________
TheargumentIsupportinthefirstparagraphisalsoinapositionofadvantagebecause_____________________________
AlthoughIagreethattheremaybeacoupleofadvantagesofB,Ifeelthatthedisadvantagesaremoreobvious.Suchas________________.
Inaword,________________________________________________.So,itissagacioustosupportthestatementthatitisbettertoA.
作文文套二
AorB
将原题复述___________________________________________WhenfacedwiththedecisionofAofB,quiteafewwoulddeemthat______________________,butothers,incontrast,believeA/Basthepremierchoiceandthatisalsomypoint.Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluence-A/-B,therearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows.
Themainreasonformypropensityfo_________isthat___________________
Thesecondreasoncanbeseenbyeverypersonthat________.
Inaddition,thesereasonarealsousablewhenweconsiderthat_________.
Therearesomedisadvantagesin____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.
Inaword,_____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat___________.
作文文套三
单一命题式
Theanswerofthisstatementdependsonyourownexperienceandlifestyle.Inmypointview,buyingcomputersisasimportantas,ifnotmoreimportantthan,buyingbooks.Soitissagaciousto____________.Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluencethechoice,thesearethreeconspicuousaspectsasfollows.
Themainreasonformypropensityfor__________isthat____________.
Anotherreasoncanbeseenbyeverypersonisthat________________.
Futhermore,______________.
Inshort,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.
作文文套四
agreeordisagree
Somepeopleargueasifitisageneraltruththata_____________________________.Buttobefrank,Icannotagreewiththem.TherearenumerousreasonswhyIholdnoconfidenceonthem,andIwouldexploreonlyafewprimaryoneshere.
Themainproblemwiththisargumentisthatitisignorantothebasicfactthat______________解释本段中心___________.
AnotherreasonwhyIdisagreewiththeabovestatementisthatIbelievethat______________.
Whatismore,somestudentsareinterestedin____________.
Inaword,________________.
作文文套五
AorB
SomepeopleprefertoA.othersbelieveB.WhenfacedwiththedecisionofAorB,quiteafewwouldclaimthat______________,butothers,incontrast,deemA/Basthepremierchoiceandthatisalsomypoint.Therearenumerousreasonswhy___________,andIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere.
ThemainreasonwhyIagree
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