作文的评价标准PPT推荐.ppt
- 文档编号:15631868
- 上传时间:2022-11-09
- 格式:PPT
- 页数:52
- 大小:621.50KB
作文的评价标准PPT推荐.ppt
《作文的评价标准PPT推荐.ppt》由会员分享,可在线阅读,更多相关《作文的评价标准PPT推荐.ppt(52页珍藏版)》请在冰豆网上搜索。
书写清楚,字母大小匀称,单词间距适当,使人赏心悦目。
词汇美Group11.Theworkishard/difficultforus.Theworkchallengesus.2.In2015Chinamadegreatcontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment.2015saw/witnessedChinasgreatcontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment.3.Ihavenomoney(cantafford)tobuyit.4.Finallyhesaw(caughtsightof)theyoungmanslightovercoatinthedistance.5.Wehadbetteruse(makeuseof)somethinginexpensive.6.Theproductsareverygood(ofhighquality)andaresoldeverywhereinChina.7.Wealllivein(share)oneandthesameplanet.8.Wecanlookat(view)theprobleminmanyways.9.Jackisveryclever.Heoftenthinksof(comesupwith/putforward)newideas.Group21.Asastudent,Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.2.Theactivity,whichisintendedtopromotefriendshipandencourageeconomy,ishighlypraisedandsupportedbytheteachersandstudentsinourschool.3.Thestrongwindblewandtheyellowleavesfellonthegroundhereandthere.4.BothyouandIhavechangedalotinthepast20years.5.Thesituationlookeddesperate,buttheydidntgiveuphope.6.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhopetomakeimprovementsintheoperatingsystem.7.Shoulditraintomorrow,wewouldntgoswimmingintheriver.8.Itwaswhattheheadmastersaidatthemeetingthatreallysurprisedus.9.Anawfulaccidentdid,however,occurtheotherday.10.Sheisunwillingtotellmewhatitisthatistroublingher.11.Thefootballmatch(being)over,crowdsofpeoplepouredouttothestreet.12.Allthepeopleinvitedtothepartyareyoungscientists13.IdpreferitifIdidnthavetodosomuchwork.14.Ithinkitshightimethatshemadeuphermind.1.WhatdoyouthinkofBeijing?
HowdoesBeijingstrike/impressyou?
2.Otherwise,youreffortswillhavenoresultsOtherwise,youreffortswillmakenosense.3.Whilecrossingtheroad,youmustbecareful.Whilecrossingtheroad,youcantbetoocareful.4.Aftermanyattempts,theplanetookoffAftermanyattempts,theplanemanagedtotakeoff.句式美5.NeverdoeshespeakNeverdoeshespeakabouthisownfamily.6.Lastyearthefactoryproducedtwiceasmanycarsasitdiddidtheyearbefore.7.Somestudentsthinkwhileothersarguesothersargues8.RomewasnotbuiltinonedayRomewasnotbuiltinoneday.9.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboyAllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.10.HewhodoesntreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.HewhodoesntreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.Group21.Jimdidntpasstheexam.Itsurprisedeverybody.Jimdidntpasstheexam,whichsurprisedeverybody.WhatsurprisedeverybodywasthatJimdidntpasstheexam.ItwassurprisingthatJimdidntpasstheexam.2.Shewasveryhappyandshebegantoprepareforthetrip.Shewassohappythatshebegantoprepareforthetrip.3.Hetriedveryhardbuthecouldntopenthedoor.Tryashemight,hecouldntopenthedoor.4.KangjieMiddleSchoolwasfoundedin1945anditswell-knowninShanxiProvince,eveninChina.Foundedin1945,KangjieMiddleSchooliswell-knowninShanxiProvince,eveninChina.5.Ihurriedtothestationbuttheytoldmethetrainhadleft.Ihurriedtothestationonlytobetoldthetrainhadleft.6.Ifweatherpermits,wewillhaveapicnic.Weatherpermitting,wewillhaveapicnic.7.Wereturnedhome,weweretiredbutwerealsohappyWereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.8.Becausemanyeyeswerefixedonme,Iwasnervous.Withmanyeyesfixedonme,Iwasnervous.9.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.Howgladweweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!
10.Wedidntfindthecorrectwayuntildark.Itwasnotuntildarkthatwefoundthecorrectway.Notuntildarkdidwefindthecorrectway.11.Whenweclimbedtowardsthetop,wefoundtheviewmorewonderful.Thehigherweclimbedthemountain,themorewonderfultheviewwas.结构美合理的段落层次,条理清晰1.开头引人入胜。
2.中间内容充实饱满。
3.结尾干净利落。
假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。
请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:
1.表示赞成。
2.提出你喜欢的栏目。
3.简要说明理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4.参考栏目:
栏目columnDearMr.Green,Iamveryexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazinetogether.Thatsoundsgreat!
AndIdefinitelyagreewithyouonthat.Someofthecolumnswhichyoumentionedintheletterarereallymycupoftea.Say,“cultureexpress”givesusabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldhavedifferentvalues,itsnecessarytolearnfromeachother.Thiswillofferawonderfulchance.Apartfromthat,“blurtout”isprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimproveoralEnglish.Lastbutnotleast,“entertainment”issocool!
Thepopularsingers,actorsandcelebritiesaresocatchyandattractivethatyouabsolutelycantmissit!
Teenagersarejustfondofthetrendythings.Well,Icantlistmore.Ireallycantwaittoreadthatmagazine!
Yoursfaithfully,LiHua衔接美作文中的连贯表达作文中的连贯表达MakeCoherence引出话题tobeginwithtostartwithgenerallyspeakingasweallknowasisknownasaruleinonesopinionitiskn
- 配套讲稿:
如PPT文件的首页显示word图标,表示该PPT已包含配套word讲稿。双击word图标可打开word文档。
- 特殊限制:
部分文档作品中含有的国旗、国徽等图片,仅作为作品整体效果示例展示,禁止商用。设计者仅对作品中独创性部分享有著作权。
- 关 键 词:
- 作文 评价 标准