小作文范文及易犯错误总结Word格式文档下载.docx
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可风提醒考生在大作文中往往战无不胜的“长难复杂句”在这里却英雄无用武之地。
“通知”的写法非常灵活,笼统可分为正式与非正式。
如果是有关部门就某事发出的通知,这要求结构严谨,用词确切,应使用正式的文体。
如果是关系会议或活动的简单通知,就可以使用非正式文体。
很明显这次吴一安女士要求考生写的是“结构严谨,用词确切”的正式文体,应为这是“有关部门”(postgraduateassociation)发出的通知。
在审题过程,考生应认真阅读题目要求,仔细审视。
从Direction我们可以得到以下关键信息,这些必须包含在我们的写作中。
1目的是recruitvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization
2包括thebasicqualificationofapplicant
3同时也包括theotherinformationyouthinkrelative。
4落款用"
5字数要求about100words,文章长度不符合要求的,要扣分。
需要强调的是,拼写、标点符号和书写时语言准确性的一个方面,在评分时,阅卷者会对书写较差的文章降低分数档次。
㈡参考范文
PostgraduateAssociation
NOTICE
CONCERNEDSTUDENTS!
Wearenowrecruitingvolunteerstoworkforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization.ThisconferencebeginsonJan29thandlaststillFeb2nd.Andwearelookingforwardtoyouractiveparticipation。
Theapplicantsarerequiredtoownthesebasicqualifications.Firstly,scandidateshouldhaveastrongprofessionalspiritandcheerfulpersonality.Secondly,applicantsmusthaveoutstandingskillsatEnglishlisteningcomprehensionandtheabilitytospeakChineseandEnglishfluently.Finally,studentswithrelevantprofessionalexperiencearepreferred。
Forfurtherinformation,pleasecontactthepostgraduateassociationat88888888,orsendane-mailtoPostgraduateAssociation@。
2语言亮点
①gainvaluableexperiences
②lookingforwardtoyouractiveparticipation可风启示有不少动词短语中的to不是副词,而是介词,这点往往考生在写作时容易忽略的。
③astrongprofessionalspiritandcheerfulpersonality
④prefer这是个写作的高级词汇,可风提示考生重点学习。
2010年考研英语作文范文及易犯错误总结
1
Describethedrawingbriefly,
Thepictureillustratesvariousrawmaterialsmakingupadeliciousandnourishing“culturalchafingdish”.Thesematerials--rangingfromConfucianism,Beijingopera,KongFu,kindheartednesstoballet,Einstein,Shakespeare–couldbecategorizedasliterature,moralvaluesandperformingarts。
2
Explainitsintendedmeaning,and,
Thepictureconveysanideathatcombinationofdifferentculturesisaninevitabletrend,itenlightensusandithelpsthewholeworldtowardharmony.Firstly,notonlyChinesecultures(Confucianism,Beijingopera…)butalsoWesterncultures(ballet,Shakespeare…)aresoattractivethatnoonecanpossiblyresist.ManypeoplefromdifferentcountrieshavebeendeeplyfascinatedbyChineseculture.Meanwhile,theChinesepeoplearealsoexposedtoamazingforeigncultures.Secondly,wecan’tdenythatbothhistoricalculturesandmodernculturesplaysignificantroleinsocialprogress.BiShen,LaoShe,ShakespeareandEinsteinallhaddevotedtheirlivestoglobalculturedevelopment。
3
Giveyourcomments
Idoagreeonamatter:
eachcultureisakindofpreciousheritageandthecombinationofculturespromotessocialadvancement.Consequently,itistimetofindwaystoacceleratethemergeofcultures.Foronething,thegovernmentshouldsupportculturecombiningprogramsandfundmorecultureprojects.Foranother,weshouldenhanceourawarenessofdrivingtheprocessofcombiningcultures.Letusenjoythisirreversibletrend---thecombinationofcultures。
PartA
51.Directions:
Youaresupposedtowriteforthepostgraduateassociationanoticetorecruitvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization,youshouldincludethebasicqualificationofapplicantandtheotherinformationyouthinkrelative。
Youshouldwriteabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“postgraduateassociation”instead。
PartB
52.Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen
3)giveyourcomments。
YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSHWERSHEET2.(20points)
PartA
Notice
DearFellowStudents:
ThePostgraduates’Associationinthisuniversityisnowcallingforyourattentiontoarecruitmentofvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalizationwhichwillbeheldinthecomingsummervacation.Thosewhoareinterestedinthisconferenceandwanttoparticipatemustmeetthefollowingrequirements:
first,youmusthaveagoodcommandofEnglish,bothwrittenandspoken;
second,organizationalskillisamust;
third,seniorswhoaremajoredininternationalrelationshipsarepreferred。
Weareconvincedthatitisofgreathelptoputyourlearningintofullpractice.Wethereforesincerelyhopeyouseizethischanceandsendyourapplicationbeforethisweekend。
Postgraduates’Association
Concernsabouttheissueofmulti-culturehavebeenbroughtaboutrecentlybythegeneralpublic,letalonethoseexpertsorscholarsinacademiccircles.Justlikewhatisdescribedbythecartoon,ahugehotpotcontainsquiteanumberof“ingredients”—ChineseGongfu,Post-modernization,PekingOpera,Enlightenment,LaoShe(afamousChinesewriter),Shakespeare,andsoon.These“ingredients”—modernorancient,homeorabroad—obviouslysymbolizethevariouskindsofcultureswhichwecan“taste”anywhereanytime。
Thissocialphenomenonillustratedbythecartoonisobviouslytheresultofglobalizationandtheopeningtotheoutsideworldpolicy.Nowalmosteveryoneinthisworld,inasense,isexposedtoahugeamountofinformation,includingvariousculturesindifferentnations.AccordingtoarecentsurveymadebyNOB,apollingorganizationinShanghai,about92%offoreignerswhocometoChinasaythattheylovetraditionalChinesecultureand84%ofyoungpeople,especiallythoseincollegesoruniversities,saythattheycelebrateChristmasandValentine’sDay.Itisaconvincingevidencethatglobalizationcanpromoteculturalexchange.Weareluckyenoughtoliveinthiscolorfulworldwithdifferentcultures,justlikethenutritionalcultural“hotpot”。
Accordingly,itcanbepredictedthatwiththefurtherdevelopmentofsociety,theblendingofvariouscultureswillbecomeevenmoreobvious.Andasglobalvillagers,wecanenjoymorecolorfulculturesinthenearfuture。
参考范文
Asissymbolicallyillustratedintheportrayal,thereisaboilinghotpotcontainingvariousingredientsofmulti-cultures.ThesepluralisticculturescanbecategorizedascelebritieshomeandabroadasBiSheng,LaoShe,ShakespeareandEinstein,philosophicalconceptsasBuddhism,Taoism,Confucianism,benevolence,rite,humanism,enlightenment,post-modernismanddeconstruction,aswellasperformingartsasPekingOpera,Kongfuand
SwanLake.Weareinformedthattheculture“hotpot”isbothdeliciousandnutritious。
Thepurposeofthecartoonististoshowusthatinsteadofbeingoutdatedandoflittlevalueinarapidlymodernizingworld,culturalblendingshouldbeencouragedandmaintained.Ontheonehand,mosaicculturesarepartoftheuniversalheritageofhumanityandtheyarepowerfulmeansofbringingtogetherdiversepeoplesandsocialgroups.Consequently,culturalreintegrationhasbecomeindispensableasameansofpromotingfurtherculturedevelopmentandmaintenance.Ontheotherhand,forChina,asforanyotherrapidlydevelopingcountry,thereisadangerthatage-oldcustomsandtraditionsmaybecomelostintheshadowsofmodernization.Ifkung-fu,PekingOperaorgooselakeballeteverperishedfromtheearth,itwouldbeatragedyofimmeasurableproportions。
Inmyview,multi-culturescanbekeptalivebythepeoplewiththetimetodoso,andisextremelyvitalinensuringacommunity’sfuturedevelopmentandprosperity.Asaconsequenceofsuccessfulcommercializationefforts,unwaveringgovernmentsupportandgrowinginterestoverseas,thefutureofculturalblendinglooksbrighterandmoresecurethaneverbefore。
TOEFL考试作文常见错误二十三种_出国考试
1。
结构不平行例:
IwasabletoraisemyTOEFLscorebystudyinghardandIreadlotsofbooks。
当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候,应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2。
不知所云
例:
Manycompaniesbeganusingcomputersmouth。
3。
段落过长,不分段主语与动词一致问题
SheareagoodfriendofminethatIhasknownforalongtime。
主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4。
句子别扭Weheatedthesoupinthemicrowavefortoolongandtheshapeofthecontainerchanged。
措辞过长或不清。
换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。
5。
不要使用缩写
在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can'
t,don'
t,it'
s,we'
ll,they'
ve等等),而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot,donot,itis,wewill,theyhave等等)。
6。
关联词语重复
SinceIwanttogotoagoodschool,thereforeIamtryingtoraisemytestscores。
不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
7。
句子不完整
Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetsintoscollege。
Forexample,myfriendinhighschool。
句子没有主要主语或主要动词,因为其实它应是一个从句。
这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
8。
不要使用get
WhenIgothome,Igottired,soIgotabookandgotsintosbed。
Get太不正式,意思也过于含糊,不适合用在正式的场合。
应将get改为一个更加具体的单词,如become,receive,find,achieve,等等。
9。
书写难以辨认信息不正确
IwouldliketostudyinAmericabecauseallmoderntechnologyoriginatedthere。
信息不正确,或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的,应当解释为什么这样,因为读者不认为是正确的)。
上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百;
我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。
为保险起见,应当使用many或most。
非英语单词Computersareveryhelpfulandadvantageable。
尽管看起来象个单词,其实不是,至少不是个英文单词。
使用这个单词的另一种形式。
10。
介词多余
Iwouldliketodiscussaboutsomethingimportantthatyoumentionedabouttomeduringyesterday。
Wewenttodowntownyesterdaytobuyawatch。
WhenIfirstcametotheUS,Ididnothavealotoffriendsinhere。
Inclass,myclassmatenevermentioneda
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