高考英语满分作文Green Action in Our Class.docx
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高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass
高考英语满分作文:
GreenActioninOurClass
【北京卷】
【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。
注意:
词数不少于60
提示词:
郊区suburbs
April12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewatering.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.
【名师点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。
文章思路清晰,要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
英语专四作文满分范文:
学生评价老师
专四题目:
学生评价老师
Manystudentsarerequiredtoevaluatetheirteachersbutsometeacherscomplainthattheseevaluationsareunfairandcaninsomecasesleadtothedismissalofateacher.Inyouropinion,isthestudentsevaluationoftheirteacheraworthwhileexercise?
专四范文:
DifficultieswithStudentsEvaluationofTheirTeacher
Thestudentsevaluationoftheirteachercanbeaverysubjectivepropositionbecauseitdependsalotonhowtheevaluationismadeandhowitissubsequentlyused.Ibelievemostteacherswouldliketoknowhoweffectivetheirteachingreallyisandhowitbenefitstheirstudents.
Adifficultywithstudentsevaluationoftheirteacherisfindingtherightformulaetoachieveanhonest,constructiveandindependentresponse.Thesizeandmakeupoftheclasscanbeareasonforthisdifficulty.Thelargertheclassthemorelikelywillbetherangeofabilityinthestudents.ThatfactLimitstheinteractionbetweentheteacherandindividualstudentsandautomaticallyinfluenceshowstudentswillperceivetheeffectivenessoftheirteacher.Smallerclassesaremuchlesslikelytohaveagreatrangeofabilityinthestudentsandtheirevaluationoftheirteacherwilltendtobemoreconsistent.Acrucialaspectswithstudentsevaluationishowitisused.Ifitisaformalpartoftheschoolsprogramitneedstobeusedconstructivelyinliaisonwiththeteachersforthebenefitofbothteachersandstudents.
Forstudentsevaluationstobeworthwhiletheyneedtobeindependentandhonest.Negativecommentsfromstudents,deliveredwithsincerity,canbeveryvaluableinhelpingteacherschangetheirteachingmethodsandmakingthemmoreeffective.Biasedevaluationscanleadtomisinterpretationandlessproductiveoutcome.(237words)
更多专四作文精彩句子:
1.Anevaluationprocessdependsonthemethodsusedandhowtheevaluationisapplied.
评价过程取决于使用的评价方法以及评价是如何进行的。
2.Whendealingwithopinions,itisusuallyverydifficulttobeentirelyobjective,
我们表达观点的时候,很难做到完全客观。
3.Teacherscanbemoreeffectivewithgenuinefeedbackfromtheirstudents.
老师从学生那里得到真实的反馈时,他们会更有效率。
4.Classsizehasasignificantimpactonstudents’perceptionsoftheirteacher.
班级大小对学生对老师的看法有重要的影响。
5.Insomeways,negativefeedbackismorevaluabletoateacherthanpositivecomments.
在某种程度上,负面的反馈比正面的评价对老师更有价值。
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英语专四作文满分范文:
强制学生上课
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
20xx高考英语满分作文(上海)
描述你在学校的一次午餐,具体要求如下:
详细描述用餐的情况
简要表述你对这次午餐的感受
这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章,因为如果只是描述用餐情况,显然缺乏深度,夸夸其谈,流于表面。
学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。
比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。
在创作范文中,笔者另辟蹊径,通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得,凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中,作者能够留有一片心灵净土,通过饮食来调节情绪,更好地面对挑战,表现出乐观的人生态度。
此文结构简单,文笔清新,语言精准,并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构,不失为一个很好的作文模板,供学生借鉴。
范文:
Theinstantthebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang,outoftheclassroompouredallstudentsbutone。
Unlikemypeers,Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen,torushthroughlunchandtoreturntotheclassroomforhomework.Iarrivedatthecanteenwhenamassivequeuehadformed.Waitingformyturnpatiently,Ismelledthearomaoftheappetizingfood.Greasyassomedishesmightbe,thewiderangeoffoodpreparedbytheschoolwassuperiorinnutritionalval-uetothatfound
elsewhere.
Thetypicalscheduleofahighschoolerisextraordinarilyhecticandthuslunchbreakisararetimewhenoverworkedstudentscanwinddownandenjoythepleasureprovidedbytheflavorfulfood.Imakeitapointtopampermytastebudsbysavoringeverylittlebitoftasteinfood.WhatIusuallyliketodooverlunchishaveamindlessconversa-tionwithacoupleofstudentswhohavealsolearnttosmelltherosesalongthebonebreakingjourneythroughhighschool.Weroundedoffourlunchwithadessert,re-freshedandsatisfied。
Cometothinkofit,itisnotthefoodbutmyattitudetowardslifethataffordsmepleasureandempowersmeinfacinguptovariouschallenges.(219words)
一、语法解构
现在分词作定语thebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang
倒装句
(1)outoftheclassroompouredallstudentsbutone
(2)Greasyassomedishesmightbe
不定式Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen
状语从句Iarrivedatthecanteenwhenamassivequeuehadformed.
在分词作状语Waitingformyturnpatiently。
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
作文题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。
请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:
1.词数:
100左右:
2.参考词汇:
房租—Tent(n.).
I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.
Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!
Allthebest!
Yours,LiHua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。
作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
DearBob,
WelcometoChina!
Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.
IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:
abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.
Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?
ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.
Bestwishes!
Yours,LiHua
满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。
DearBob,
Howareyouthesedays?
I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.
Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.
Yours,
LiHua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。
由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。
同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
DearBob,
I’msogladthatyouarecomingtolearnChinesehere.I’vealreadyfoundyouahousenearourschool.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutit.
YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXinChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthebedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherroomsconnectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.Hopeyou’llenjoystayinghere!
Yours,
LiHua
满分理由
本文内容具体,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。
DearBob,
I’mgladtohearfromyou.
Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.
Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.
Yours,
LiHua
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
【试题回放】
实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听。
请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为“BeingaGoodListener”的英文演讲稿。
注意:
1、对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。
开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Goodafternoon,everyone.
Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“BeingaGoodListener”.
Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect,promoteunderstanding,andimproveinterpersonalrelationship.
Manypeoplesuggestthatparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchildren,sotheywillunderstandthembetter,andfinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgap;teachersshouldlistenmoretotheirstudents,thentheycanmeettheirneedsbetter,andplacethemselvesinagoodrelationshipwiththeirstudents;studentsshouldlistenmoretotheirclassmates,thustheywillhelpandlearnfromeachother,andafriendshipislikelytobeformed.
WhatIwant
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