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写作冲刺
作文分数占总分的15%,也就是106.5分,在这部分要达到63.9分为及格。
答题时间为30分钟。
建议控制在25分钟完成写作
一、审题
1)审题–题材
1-2分钟审题一个词一个词过题材应用类;议论类
essay小议论文写作:
应用文议论文40次
盯着看
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该…
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
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Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofDueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2.出现这种情况的原因
3.为了改变这种状况,我认为…
DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling
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字数要求:
90—160words之间六级150/190上线
1)审题目中的可用信息及可抄词汇的改写信息。
老外的习惯
Payattentiontofocusonconcentrateon
2)审字数
二.写作过程25分钟
拆解提纲,写作铅笔一头尖,另一头粗。
第一段简述父母为孩子包办一切这一社会问题
第二段分析该问题可能带来的后果(endupwithchildren’slackofindependence,为下一段提出解决策略做铺垫)
第三段为父母提出解决这一问题的方法和策略,并教导孩子主动承担责任。
(beresponsiblefor)
或
第一段描述现象:
父母包办一切
第二段提出对策:
1.从父母的角度提出解决问题的对策
2.站在自己的角度给父母提出建议
3.结合自身的实际提出合理建议
第三段补充论证:
独立的误区,并不是身体上的、思想上的分离。
即使父母年迈,我们仍可以住在一起,互相照顾。
三、查错(3分钟)
1)拼写,标点。
逗,句号书名号错误》引言:
“”,“
高分作文:
破折号—解释说明;同义复现分号;句际关系:
并列,转折
2)时态的一致性(范畴)
议论文:
一般现在时—现在进行时—
高分作文:
现在完成时havedone
最后一段:
将来时态,发起号召。
3)人称的一致:
推荐第三人称people,they,或第一人称Iwe
不要用you
4)主谓一致
phenomenonisknowledge
phenomenaare
criterionis
criteriaare
四、写作的类型
1.问题解决型:
1)提出问题
2)分析问题AB
3)解决问题AB
HowIfinancemycollegeeducation?
2)分析问题
3)解决问题
2.正反观点对比类:
1)有些人认为
2)有些人认为
3)我的看法
例证一
SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV
例证二
考研深造
工作
我的看法:
3.现象阐释类
1)描述现象
2)评论社会作者
3)个人态度改进提升
五、评分分标准
2.14调理不清,思路混乱,句句错,严重错误。
5.34基本切题,连贯性差,较多语言错误。
8.54基本切题有些地方思想表达不清。
文章勉强连贯,有相当多的语言错误。
11.74切题,思想清楚,文章连贯,少量错误。
14.94切题,思想清楚,通顺,隐形错误。
六、写作思路:
西方人是—→线性思维我们是螺旋形的
Topic:
Detail,development
Example
Conclusion
TDEC原则
1)第一段简述父母为孩子包办一切这一社会问题
2)自然过渡:
但有些父母却为孩子包办一切
3)引用生活中的事例,证实父母为孩子包办一切非空穴来风。
4)分析包办所带来的后果。
5)提出问题:
父母应该如何做?
6)7.具体阐述解决问题的策略,层次分明
8.简要总结前文所提的具体策略,使文章结尾不显突兀。
七、加分原则:
1.短语优先:
能用短语表达的含义不用单个单词
Solve–workout,figureout
Cause--bringon
Choose—selectsthasoptionoptional
Intheprocessoflearning凑字数套收集10篇文章
2.考虑句际关系的多样性
————————,which
SVOandS,V,O,
SV1O2andV2O2
3.并列结构进行语义强调和复现:
Growingbodiesneedmovementandexercise增加词汇、修辞的高度
Youngstudentsshouldbeindustriousandstudious.
Youngstudentsshouldbewithpersistenceandperseverance.
八、语法
1.句型意识强
Therebe….
2.名词性从句:
A.主语从句
Thathesurvivedtheearthquakeisamiracle.
Itisamiraclethathesurvivedtheearthquake.
B.宾语从句
Ithinkthat…
C.表从
Chinaisnotwhatitusedtobe.
D.同位从句
Ihavenodoubtthatyoucouldovercomethedifficulty.
3.形容词性从句:
限定性whichthatwhowhomthatwhosewhere=inwhichwhen=atwhich,inwhichwhy=forwhich
非限定性:
which,who六级asweallknow,smokingisharmfulforhealth
4.状从:
时间,地点,条件,让步,方式,原因,结果,目的。
5.善用被动语态
一般时态:
amisare+p.p
过去:
waswere+p.p
将来:
isgoingtobe+pp
Willbe+pp
完成have,has+been+pp
进行时be+being+pp不定式+bedone
89.Welookforwardto___________(被邀请出席开幕式)
beinginvitedtoattendtheopeningceremony.
5.善用虚拟语气:
假的
1)形式
一般现在:
IfIhadcash,Iwouldbuyit.
过去:
IfIhadhadcash,Iwouldhaveboughtit.
将来:
IfIweretohavecash,Iwouldbuyit.
2)If省略,助动词提前。
3)wish
IwishIwereabird.
IwishIhadseenitbefore.
IwishIweretogo/Icouldgo.
4)Be型虚拟
A.建议、命令、请求等词汇所连接的句子
宾从:
insist,suggest,order,demand,advise,require,propose,command,request,desire,insist,require,promise,resolve,argue,maintain,determine,advise,advocate,persuade
Mysuggestionisthat
表从:
mysuggestionisthatshould+v
Adviceorderdemandrequirement
同位语从句:
Myadvicethatweshouldhaveaconferenceisacceptedbyboss.Proposalpropose
主语从句:
Itissuggested/ordered/demanded…that…
B.Itisimportant/necessary/strange/natural/pity/shame/nowonder…that…should…V
90.Itissuggestedthattheairconditioner_________(要安装在窗户旁)
shouldbeinstalledbythewindow.
C.目的状语中的should+v,lest,forfearthat,incase…
Youmustwakehimearlylestheshouldbelateforschool.
Taketheumbrellaforfearthatitshouldrain.
Keepquietincaseyouinterrupthim.
5)作文句型里的虚拟:
onlyby…canwe
Onlyinthisway,canwe
Onlywith…,canpeople
IfonlyIhadmoney.
Itishightime…
Itisabouttimewefashionedlawtostopthisundesirablephenomenon.
Itishightimeweputanendtothisnegativethinkingtowardsnature.
九、牢记
1.一,二,三原则
First,second,third,
Firstly,secondly,thirdly,
Lastbutnotleast,
2.moreover,still,furthermore,inaddition,finally
Ontheonehand,ontheotherhandforonething,foranother.
十、课后任务
1.俗词升级:
抽象词具体化、概念词具象化
People:
individuals;person;folks;townsfolk;mass;massive;
Bad:
negative;pessimistic;undesirable;unpleasant;dreadful;
Good:
positive;optimistic;decent;rewarding;Sthattractme;arousemyinterest;attention;sparkmyinterest;
2.英—汉---英互检自测作文法
范文翻译成汉语;过两天翻译成英语;再翻译成英语;看差距。
四级擦边过的,没写过成文的作文的,定不过。
十一、应用文:
书信;告示;通知范畴;口头作文;演讲词;导游词;简历重格式
DearSir,
十二、范文
第一段描述现象:
父母包办一切
第二段寻求对策:
培养独立、不放任自流、不背离传统。
补充论证:
肯定传统,论证饱满。
第三段应付的策略:
也可以用First,second,finally简明词汇串联观点,辅之以定语从句、倒装句增加句式的高级度。
Itisnothingunusualtofindoverprotectiveparentswhohelptheirchildreninallaspectsoflife.Thequestionis,aretheysuretheirheartloadedwithlovewillbringgoodtotheirchildren?
Let’slookattherealsituationofthesecond-richgeneration.Someofthem,ratherthanbecomingthesecond-stronggeneration,becomesthedefeatedgenerationwhichisnotoriousfortheirlifefocusedonconsumptionratherthancreation.
Becauseofthechangesofeducationinhistory,mostChineseparents,thoughsuccessfullyaccumulatewealth,don’tknowmuchabouttherightvaluetheyshouldpassontothenewgeneration.Theyhavetriedallthattheycantobegoodparentswhileneglectingthecorevaluetheyshouldaddress,whichisINDEPENDENCE.
Howshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependent?
Theyshouldgivetheirchildrenthefreedomtomakechoicesforthemselves.Childrencannotbehappyiftheydon’thavecontrolovertheirlife,whichindailylife,meanstheymakechoicesforthemselves,like,whattoeat,whattowear,whatcareertodo,whatkindofspousetheyaregoingtomarry.Someparentsmaybeopen-mindedenoughtolettheirchildrentomakethesetinydecisionsaboutfoodandclothes,butwhenitcomestothebigones,theyaretooanxioustolettheirchildrenhaveatry.Theyusedtobeyoungandtheymademistakesandnowitistheirsonsanddaughters’turntobeyoung—thedeeploveandcareissointensethatitbecomesevensuffocating--theyarereluctanttogivetheirchildrenopportunitiestostarttoberesponsiblefortheirownlives.
Itisbeyondreproachthatchildrenarealwaysconsideredtheappleofparents’eye,whichisespeciallytrueinsingle-childfamilies.However,manyparentsgosofarastotakeovereverythingfortheirprincesorprincesses,fromtheirlifeandstudyeventotheirfuture.
Itisnotunusualtowitnessthatanincreasingnumberofchildrenareaccompaniedbyparentsontheirfirstdayincollege.Ideclaredinnouncertaintermsthatitwillendupwiththechildren’slackofindependence.Insuchawordfulloffiercecompetition,beingindependentbecomesessentialforawould-besuccess.Thus,whatshouldparentsdo?
Inmyhumbleopinion,ontheonehand,parentsshouldraisechildreninafree-rangewayinsteadofbeing“helicopter”parents,whoalwaysseemtohovertheirchildren;ontheotherhand,parentsshouldteachchildrentoberesponsiblefortheirownbehaviorsinsteadofmonopolizingeverything.Iclingtothebeliefthatonlywhenparentsrealizewhatisbetterfortheirchildrenandcaretheminarightway,cantheyhelpchildrenindependence.
加分亮点:
Beyondreproach
Beaccompaniedby
Declareinnouncertainterms
Fiercecompetition
Essential
Clingtothebelief
主题词汇
Over-protective
Self-control
Instructive
Decision-maker
Demanding
Frustration
Counton
句式拓展
1.Childrenshouldbeleftwithmorechancesofmakingdecisionssothattheycanseetheconsequencesof
2.Asurveyreleasedbysuggestedthatmorethan64%ofuniversitystudentsrelytheirparentso…,letalone..
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