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MBA模考串讲
作文评分举例:
A.GOODHEALTH
B.Timelimit:
40minutes
C.wordlimit:
morethan150words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)
D.YourcompositionshouldbebasedontheOUTLINEbelowandshouldstartwiththegivenopeningsentence:
“Thedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.”
E.YourcompositionshouldbewrittenneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.
Outline:
1.Importanceofgoodhealth.
2.Waystokeepfit.
3.Myownpractices.
首先要定下一个主题或一个中心意思,并用一句话表达出来(即主题句);其次,选择有助于阐述这一中心意思的例子或细节,把他们一一列出;最后,把这些细节按逻辑顺序排好,一个段落的初稿就这样设计出来了。
Sample1(18分)
Whereveryouareandwhateveryoudo,stayinghealthyisalwaysimportant.Withtheimprovementofourlivingstandards,peopleareattachingmoreandmoreimportancetotheirhealth.Ordinarypeoplecan’tkeepthehighworkingefficiencywithoutgoodhealth.Thesamethingistruewithstudents,scientistsanddoctors.
Inmyopinion,gooddietandexercisesaretwomajorwaystokeephealthy.Thefoodweeateverydaymustberationalandshouldincludemeat,vegetables,eggs,andfruit.Itisimportanttodrinkwatereverydayandnottogetaddictedtodrinkingcoffeeorsomeothersoftdrink.Exercisingeverydayisalsoessentialforustostayhealthy.Wecanridebicycles,playtennisorswim.Ofcoursewedon’tneedtoexhaustourselves.Weshouldplanourphysicalexercisesaccordingtoouractualcondition.Anhouradayisenough.
Asauniversitystudent,Ihavemuchfreetimetodoexercises.Iusuallyplaybadmintonandtennis.ButsometimesIamlazyanddonotexerciseforallkindsofexcuses,suchascoldweatherandexams.Imustcorrectit.Iamalsocarefulwithmydiet.Inaway,keepinghealthyisnotveryhard,ifyoujusttakeitseriously.(210words.)
Sample2(17分)
Inourcompetitivesocietyitisimportanttomaintaingoodhealth.Ontheonehand,peoplewithgoodhealthcandoworkwithfullconfidenceandtheirprogressinworkinturncontributestotheirhealthandhappiness.Ontheotherhand,asickoneisusuallynotinterestedineverythingarroundhimandthereforehelosesmanyopportunitiestobecomesuccessful.
Therearemanywaystokeepfit.First,thosewhoarealwaysonthegofrommorningtillnightshouldfindtimetorelax.Becausetoomuchstresswillaffecttheirhealth.Second,enoughtimeshouldbeleftforsleepbecausethatwillhelponebecomerestedandrefreshed.Finally,regularphysicalexercisebenefitsone’shealthealot.Sooneshouldalwayskeepinmindthatacertainamountofexerciseisnotawasteoftime.
Asforme,Ilikeplayingtennisinthemoring.Ialsotakecaretohaveenoughsleepandrelaxation.Ibelievethiswillensuremygoodhealthfortherestofmylife.(173words)
评语:
内容切题,涵盖了提纲的全部要点;文章通顺,语言流畅,句式变化多样,用词面较宽。
篇幅长度符合要求。
文章表明,作者英语基本功较好,修辞表达能力较强。
Sample3(15分)
Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,thepaceofpeople’slifeisbecomingmorequick.Inordertoworkefficiently,weknowthatgoodhealthisavitalimportancetoallofus.Forexample,apersoningoodhealthisabletoundertakemorehardtaskswhichunhealthypeoplecan’t.Therefore,everyonewantstohavebetterhealth.
Tokeepfit,firstly,weshouldpersistindoingphysicalexerciseseveryday.Secondly,weshouldhaveagooddietwhichisgoodforone’shealth.Thirdly,itisknowntoallthatgoodhealthisconnectedtoone’sfeelings.Thosewhoarealwaysinhighspiritwillenjoygoodhealth.Finaly,itisnecessarytogiveupbadhabit,forexample,smokingtoensuregoodhealth.
Astomypractices,Igetupearlyinthemorningandgooutforbreathingfreshair.Intheafternoon.Ialwaysspendanhourorsotoplaytenniswithmyfriendsintheuniversity.I’mconfidentthatIamindeedingoodhealthcondition.(173words)
评语:
内容切题,体现了提纲的全部要点;表达基本清楚,文字连贯;句式变化较多;结构与用词有少量一般错误;长度符合要求。
文章表明,作者英语基本功比较好,有一定的修辞表达能力。
Sample4(10分)
Everyonewantstohaveagoodhealth.Weoftenhearonesay“IfIweremorehealthy,Iwould…”.Itisclearthatgoodhealthisofaimportance.Ahealthypersoncanspendmoretimeonstudying,whileaweakonehastospendthesametimeonseeingthedoctorandhavingrest.Whenapersonwantstofindajob,theemployerwillcertainlyemploythehealthyone.
SoGoodhealthisimportant,thenhowtokeepfit?
Thereareseveralways.IntheU.S.,itisknowntoallthatnosmoking,neverbeingdrinking,suitabledietandactivepracticewillbringapersongoodhealth.Otherways,suchasgoodsleep,suitablerest…arealsonecessary.
Inmyopinion,Ithinkthepracticeisthemostimportant.SoIgetupearlyeverymorning,runontheplaygroundforabouthalfanhour.Ithink,asfarasIpersistindoingit,Iwillhavegoodhealth.(163words)
评语:
内容切题,包括了提纲的全部要点;表达基本清楚;但结构与用词错误较多,有少数是严重错误;长度符合要求。
文章表明,作者基本具有英语写作能力。
五句格言:
1.Life/Man人生·人
Thewiseareinstructedbyreason;ordinaryminds,byexperience;thestupid,bynecessity;thebrutes,byinstinct.
聪明人遵循理智;普通人依照经验;蠢人根据需要;畜生凭借本能
2.Ideal/Hope理想·希望
Theonlylimittoourrealizationoftomorrowwillbeourdoubtsoftoday.
实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。
3.Work/Struggle/Perseverance工作·奋斗·坚韧
Ourgreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.
我们最大的光荣并不在于从不跌倒,而在于每次跌倒后都能站起来。
4.Success/Failure成功·失败
Successisneverfinalandfailureisneverfatal.It’scouragethatcounts.
没有最终的成功,也没有致命的失败。
只有勇气才是最重要的。
5.Time/Age时间·年龄
Yesterdayisdead,forgetit;tomorrowdoesnotexist,don’tworry;todayishere,useit.
昨天已经逝去,把它忘掉;明天还未来到,不必烦恼;今天就在这里,把它用好。
2005年翻译
(1)
Anairmuseumdirectorwithforesightmightfollowtrendsincomputergraphicstomakeexhibitsmoreappealingtoyoungervisitors.
有远见卓识的艺术博物馆馆长可能会紧跟电脑图像的流行趋势,是展品更具感染力,以吸引较年轻的观众。
2005年翻译(5)
Thefuturistsrecognizedthatthefutureworldiscontinuouswiththepresentworld,sowecanlearnagreatdealaboutwhatmayhappeninthefuturebylookingsystematicallyatwhatishappeningnow.
未来学家意识到,未来世界是现今世界的延续。
因此通过由系统地观察现在正在发生的事,我们能了解到很多未来可能发生的事。
2006年翻译(3)
Theyreplacedabrokendevice,repairedanotherandcartedawayaloadofrubbishthathadbeenleftonthestation,showingtheshuttlecanbringfullloadsbackdownfromspace.
他们更换了一个破损的装置,修复了另一台设备并运载除了一批存留在空间站的垃圾,看起来飞船可以从空间站运载走整批垃圾。
教材第四篇四
Therewillbetelevisionchatshowshostedbyrobots,andcarswithpollutionmonitorsthatwilldisablethemwhentheyoffend.
译文:
届时,将出现由机器人主持的电视谈话节目以及装有污染监控器的汽车,一旦这些汽车排污超标(违规),监控器就会使其停驶。
考点总结:
1)定语2)词义具体化3)时态
教材第六篇一
Whiletherearealmostasmanydefinitionsofhistoryastherearehistorians,modernpracticemostcloselyconformstoonethatseeshistoryastheattempttorecreateandexplainthesignificanteventsofthepast.
译文:
几乎每个历史学家对史学都有自己的界定,但现代史学家的实践最趋向于认为,历史学是试图重现过去的重大史实并对其作出解释。
考点:
状语从句,比较结构,定语从句,抽象名词,意译。
教材第一篇五
Whorfcametobelieveinasortoflinguisticdeterminismwhich,initsstrongestform,statesthatlanguageimprisonsthemind,andthatthegrammaticalpatternsinalanguagecanproducefar-reachingconsequencesforthecultureofasociety.
句子分析:
这是一个并列带宾语从句,定语从句,插入成分的复合句
译文:
沃夫进而相信某种类似语言决定论的观点,其极端说法是:
语言禁锢思维,语言的语法结构能对一个社会的文化产生深远的影响。
模考一翻译五:
Onthewholesuchaconclusioncanbedrawnwithacertaindegreeofconfidence,butonlyifthechildcanbeassumedtohavehadthesameattitudetowardsthetestastheotherswithwhomheisbeingcompared,andonlyifnotpunishedbylackofrelevantinformationwhichtheypossessed.
参考译文:
总的来说,得出这种结论是有一定程度把握的,但是必须具备两个条件:
能够假定这个孩子对测试的态度和与他比较的另一个孩子的态度相同;他也没有因为缺乏别的孩子所具有的有关知识而受影响。
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