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必背作文
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DIRECTIONS:
A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150words.
B.YouressaymustbewrittenclearlyontheANSWERSHEETII.
C.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:
1.effectofthecountry’sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife
2.possiblereasonfortheeffect
3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection
各档次分数段例文
(15——13分)
Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmerica,andsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.
Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?
Ithinkthereareseveralpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowthofpopulation,moreandmorepeoplecametolivewheresomewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycannotadapttothenewenvironmentanddie.Second,althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalanceandtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.Thedeforestationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Sosomeofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.
Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,thegovernmentsshouldmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,thegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovethenatureandprotectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepracticalactionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.
[评语]内容符合要求,包括了图中说明“effect”的有关信息。
语言流畅,层次分明,句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确,文章长度符合要求。
但还有少数错误出现。
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2000
Directions:
Studythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteanessayto
A.Describethepictures.
B.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures,and
C.Suggestcounter-measures.
Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEETII.
ABriefHistoryofWorldCommercialFishing
各档次分数段例文
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Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharplydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,butmanyfishing-boats.
Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.Owingtoover-fishing,thenumberoffisheshasobviouslydecreased.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,wewon’tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.
Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.Also,Ibelievethatwehumanbeingscanovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.
[给分]14分
[评语]内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点;文章通顺,语言流畅,句式变化多样;用词面较宽;虽有个别不妥之处,但该生基本功较好;表达能力较强;长度符合要求。
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Whenweusetheword“love”,wedonotsimplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,whichisaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.Thepicturebelowillustratestherealmeaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.Infact,throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshaveregardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions.
Asanexampleofthepoweroflove,weshouldrememberhowtheChinesepeopleofallnationalitiesrespondtothecalltohelpthevictimsofnaturaldisasterseveryyear.Althoughtheirincomesarestilllowbyinternationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydonothesitatetodonatewhatevertheycan——beitmoneyorgoods——tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.Moreover,theydothiswithnothoughtofgainforthemselves.
Inmyopinion,thebestwaytoshowloveistohelppeoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.Weshouldalwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefamilymembersorcompletestrangers.Inthisway,wecanhelptomaketheworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,thedarkertheshadowsofsorrowbecome,themorebrightlythelampofloveshines.(232)
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ThepicturevividlydepictsalovelyAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostumewithasweetsmileonherface.Shewearsribbons,necklacesandotheraccessoriesthatarecharacteristicoftheclothesofacertainChineseminoritygroup.Undoubtedly,thecostumehasaddedorientalcharmtoherbeautifullook/appearance/features.
Whatthepictureconveysgoesfarbeyondonlyanewfashiontrend.Instead,itcarriesculturalmeanings.ThefactthatpeoplefromdifferentcountriesareattractedtomysteriousChinesecultureindicatesthattosomeextentaculturecanbeaccepted,respected,appreciatedandsharedinternationally.Inotherwords,anation’suniqueculturecanbecomeinternationalthroughworldwideeconomicandculturalexchanges.Sincethetrendofglobalizationbecomeirresistible,culturalcommunicationcaneffectivelyimprovemutualunderstandingandfriendship.
Itismyviewthatnationalcultureaspricelessspiritualtreasureshouldbepreservedandcherished.Meanwhile,therearegoodreasonstoadvocateinternationalcultureforthoseideasfromtheothercultures,controversialorevenabsurdatfirstsight,canprovideadifferentperspectiveforustoobservetheworldinthelongrun.Nevertheless,whenweareconfrontedwithadifferentculture,weshouldbesensibleenoughtoabsorbitsessenceandtoresistitsdarkside.Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworlddimensional,colorfulandvigorous.(220)
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Thesetofdrawingsabovevividlydepictsthedestinyofaflowerindifferentcircumstances.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,theflowerisplacedinacomfortablegreenhousethatsheltersitfromthethreateninglighteningandstorm.Withpropertemperature,moistureandfertilizer,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Onthecontrary,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothedrivingrain,theflowersoonfadesandwithers,withthepetalscastaboutonthegrounds.
Tobeginwith,thepurposeofthedrawingsistoshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandthetestofthestorm,yetthesymbolicmeaningssubtlyconveyedshouldbetakenmoreseriously.Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople,tobespecific,theonlychildreninourcurrentsociety;thegreenhouseepitomizesparents’dotingcareandabundantmaterialsuppliesthatcanshieldthechildrenfromthestorms,ortheharshreality.Oncetheyoungpeoplebegintoseekindependenceandacceptchallengesfromtherealworld,theyarefoundtoospoiledtobestrongenoughinthefaceofdifficulties.
Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawings.Ontheonehand,wecanfrequentlyusethemtoenlightentheyouthtobemoreindependentinlife.Ontheotherhand,parentsshouldbesensibleenoughtogivetheirchildrenmorefreedomtodealwithtroublesandproblems.Onlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersinthiscompetitiveworld.(272)
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Itisvividlydepictedinthecartoonthataboyisrunningalongtheracetrackwithpainstakingefforts,sweatpouringdownhisface.Afteralongjourney,heismakingthefinalspurttowardthefinishingline,withstrongdeterminationtobecomethechampion.
Undoubtedlythecartoonconveysthemeaningthatlifeisliketheprocessofrunninginwhichoneshouldmakeconstanteffortsandneverstopmakingprogress.Owingtothequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,stimulatingeveryonetopursueonegoalafteranother.Onceapersonstopsmakingprogress,hecanhardlymaintainhispastgloryandsurviveinthiscompetitiveworld.Generallyspeaking,neitheracountrynorapersoncanremainstagnant.
Acaseinpointisthesuccessfullaunchingof“ShenzhouVSpacecraft”whichsetschinainahighpositionofaviationandspaceflight.AlthoughitmeansagreatachievementforusChinese,wearefacingnewchallengesinthefutureandneedtodofurtherresearchinspacetechnology.Anotherillustrationiscloselyrelatedtous,theexaminees.Ifwepassthistestandarefortunatelyadmittedbyauniversity,weshallnotstopmakingefforts.Onthewhole,theseexampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat“destinationisanotherstartingpoint.”(216)
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Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoon,fourchildrenareplayinga“footballmatch”oftakingcareoftheiragedfather.Eachofthemstandsinadifferentcornerofafootballfield.Theeldestsonkickedoutthefatherwiththeotherthreechildrenguardingtheirgoals.
Thepurposeofthedrawingistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothemistreatmentofseniorcitizens.Firstandforemost,somepeopleshirktheirdutyoffinanciallysupportingtheiroldandhelplessparentsduetotheirowninterests.Furthermore,someelderlypeopleareoftenill-treatedbytheirownchildrenandcannotleadanormallife.Lastbutnotleast,whilesomeyoungpeopleenjoyacomfortablelife,theirparentsareneglectedandreducedtoutterpoverty.
Itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenessoftheyoung
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