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四级范文
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200612
1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会
2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会.
3.我的看法.
正反观点对比题的写作结构是:
第一段, 简单描述事件
第二段, 对比两种观点
第三段, 阐述自己的观点
下面是正反观点对比题经常使用的模板:
第二段使用:
Thereisthepublicdebatenowadaysastotheissueof…(综述)
Peoplewhoareinfavorof/advocate…(名词)…maintainthat…(句子:
支持人的观点)
Butthosewhoobjectto/areopposedto…(名词)…,ontheotherhand(插入语),contendthat…(句子:
反对人的观点)
第三段使用:
Whenitcomestome,Iclaimthattheformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.自己的原因阐述
分析如下:
1黑体字为课程中讲授的原封不动的内容(100个字,总字数199 占全部字数的50%)
2划下划线的内容为课上已经给出的语法和形式(60个字,总字数199,占全部字数的32%)
3没有任何标示的内容为考场上现场写作的内容(占全部字数的18%)
HaveyoueverseentheSpringFestivalEveningprogram?
(AreyouwillingtowatchSpringFestivalGala?
AreyoucrazyaboutSpringFestivalGala?
)InoursocietydominatedbytheincreasingemphasisontheChinesetraditionalculture,thisopportunityoffamilygatheringperformsanextraordinarilycrucialfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole.However,gradually,differentattitudesemergetowardwatchingtheprogram.
Thereisthepublicdebatenowadaysastotheissueofexistenceofthegala.Peoplewhoadvocate(areinfavorof)itmaintainthatinChinaareahostofpeople,beingsoindulgedinthewesternculturethathardlycantheysetasidesometimetoexperiencethetraditionalculture.Consequently,thegalaoffersthemagoldenopportunitytodoso.Butthosewhoareopposedto(objectto)itsexistence,ontheotherhand,contendthatnotonlycanitexerttheexceedinglynegativeimpactonpersonaltimebutitcanalsoforceeveryonetoacceptitself.
Whenitcomestome,Iclaimthattheformeropinionholdsmoreweight.OnnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceofthisTVshow.Itishightimethatwesparednoefforttoadoptperfectlyefficientandeffectivemeasurestocontinuesuchactivityonsuchvitaloccasion.
写作原则:
语言高级化
内容简单化
结构要听话
第一段的句子分析:
分析点1
开头使用问句
20056庆祝教师节
HaveyouevercelebratedTeacher’sDay?
AreyouwillingtocelebrateTeacher’sDay?
AreyoucrazyaboutcelebratingTeacher’sDay?
分析点2
Inthesocietydominatedbytheincreasingemphasison…在关注于。
。
。
的社会中
20056庆祝教师节
Inthesocietydominatedbytheincreasingemphasisoneducation,
分析点3
Sthperform(s)anextraordinarilycrucialfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole起着非常重要的作用,不仅对个人并且对社会
20056庆祝教师节
Teachersperformanextraordinarilycrucialfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole
200712选修课
Selectingproperoptionalcoursesperformsanextraordinarilycrucialfunctionfornotonlystudentsintheirpersonallifebutalsotheuniversityasawhole
20026计算机的使用时间增长迅速
Computersperformanextraordinarilycrucialfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole
分析点4
However,gradually,differentattitudesemergetowardwatchingtheprogram.
作为观点对比题第一段最后一句话。
引出下文。
200512名校校园是否开放
However,gradually,differentattitudesemergetowardthisphenomenon.
第二段的句子分析
分析点1
观点对比题的模版
第二段使用:
Thereisthepublicdebatenowadaysastotheissueof…(综述)
Peoplewhoareinfavorof/advocate…(名词)…maintainthat…(句子:
支持人的观点)
Butthosewhoobjectto/areopposedto…(名词)…,ontheotherhand(插入语),contendthat…
第三段使用:
Whenitcomestome,Iclaimthattheformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.自己的原因阐述
200512名校校园是否开放
第二段使用:
Thereisthepublicdebatenowadaysastotheissueofthenecessityofcampusopening.Peoplewhoareinfavorofthisphenomenonmaintainthat…(句子:
支持人的观点)Butthosewhoobjecttoit,ontheotherhand(插入语),contendthat…(句子:
反对人的观点)
第三段使用:
Whenitcomestome,Iclaimthattheformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.自己的原因阐述
分析点2
某地有某人,这个/些人如此…以至于…
inChinaareahostofpeople,beingsoindulgedinthewesternculturethathardlycantheysetasidesometimetoexperiencethetraditionalculture.
200412竞选学生会主席
Intheuniversityareahostofstudents,beingsoindulgedinimprovingtheirpracticalcapabilitiesthathardlycantheyresistthetemptationofvariousactivitiesorganizedbyStudent’sUnion.
20046作导游
InChinaareahostofpeople,beingsoindulgedinthetraditionalculturethathardlycantheyresistthetemptationofForbiddenCity.
分析点3
notonlycanitexerttheexceedinglynegativeimpactonpersonaltimebutitcanalsoforceeveryonetoacceptitself.
200712选修课
Notonlycanselectingtheoptionalcoursesexertthepositiveimpactonstudents’academicperformance,butitcanalsoenlargetherangeoftheirknowledge.
分析点4
Consequently=Inconsequence=Asaconsequence=therefore因此
第三段的句子分析
分析点1
Whenitcomesto关于…
Whenitcomestothetrafficregulations/thepracticalworkingexperience/theoptionalcourses
分析点2
onnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceofsth./doingsth.我们绝不能够忽视…的重要性
200712选修课
onnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceoftheelectives/theoptionalcourses/therightthatstudentcanchoosewhattheyshowtheinterestin.
分析点3
Itishightimethat…句子中动词使用过去时 是…的时候了
可以考虑作为结尾句的句型
200712选修课
Itishightimethatweselectedwhatweshowtheinterestin.
分析点4
wesparenoefforttoadoptperfectlyefficientandeffectivemeasurestodo我们不遗余力地采取非常及时有效的措施做某事
200712选修课
Itishightimethattheschoolsparednoefforttoadoptperfectlyefficientandeffectivemeasurestoofferstudentsmoreopportunitiestochooseelectivesinwhichstudentsshowtheinterestandenlargetheirrangeofknowledge.
分析点5
vital=crucial=significant=important
perfectly=extraordinarily=exceedingly=very
共199字
可以进行缩改,红色字体为可以去除的
HaveyoueverseentheSpringFestivalEveningprogram?
InoursocietydominatedbytheincreasingemphasisontheChinesetraditionalculture,thisopportunityoffamilygatheringperformsanextraordinarilycrucialfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole.However,gradually,differentattitudesemergetowardwatchingtheprogram.
Thereispublicdebatenowadaysastotheissueofexistenceofthegala.PeoplewhoadvocateitmaintainthatinChinaareahostofpeople,beingsoindulgedinthewesternculturethathardlycantheysetasidesometimetoexperiencethetraditionalculture.Consequently,thegalaoffersthemagoldenopportunitytodoso.Butthosewhoareopposedtoitsexistence,ontheotherhand,contendthatnotonlycanitexerttheexceedinglynegativeimpactonpersonaltimebutitcanalsoforceeveryonetoacceptitself.
Whenitcomestome,Iclaimthattheformeropinionholdsmoreweight.OnnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceofthisTVshow.Itishightimethatwesparednoefforttoadoptperfectlyefficientandeffectivemeasurestocontinuesuchactivityonsuchvitaloccasion.
由于最后一句话是虚拟语气,所及进行修改
Itishightimethatwecontinuedsuchactivityonsuchvitaloccasion.
缩减版
HaveyoueverseentheSpringFestivalEveningprogram?
This opportunityoffamilygatheringperformsanextraordinarilycrucialfunction.However,gradually,differentattitudesemergetowardwatchingtheprogram.
Thereispublicdebatenowadaysastotheissueofexistenceofthegala.PeoplewhoadvocateitmaintainthatinChinaareahostofpeople,beingsoindulgedinthewesternculturethathardlycantheyexperiencethetraditionalculture.Consequently,thegalaoffersthemagoldenopportunitytodoso.Butthosewhoareopposedtoitsexistence,ontheotherhand,contendthatnotonlycanitexerttheexceedinglynegativeimpactonpersonaltimebutitcanalsoforceeveryonetoacceptitself.
Whenitcomestome,Iclaimthattheformeropinionholdsmoreweight.Itishightimethatwecontinuedsuchactivityonsuchvitaloccasion.
共143个字
20066
亲爱的新东方学员:
Anannouncementforavoluntaryprogram
1校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动,现招志愿者
2本次志愿者活动的目的、内容以及安排
3报名条件和联系方式
Areyouwillingtoparticipateinourvoluntaryprogram?
Inoursocietydominatedbytheincreasingemphasisonwelfare,voluntaryactivitiesperformtheextraordinarilyvitalfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole.Pleasetojoinusasavolunteer.
Thedetailsoftheactivityarelistedasfollows.Inthefirstplace,thereisnodenyingthatthepracticalcapabilitymakeshumanbeingswhattheyaretoday,andourpracticewillexerttheexceedinglycrucialimpactonitsimprovement.Inthesecondplace,thearrangementmainlyincludesassistingtheseniorcitizensincleaninghousesandsoon.Inthelastplace,thescheduleanddetailsofplanswillbedeliveredbynextweek.
Itmaybesaidwithoutfearofexaggerationthatonnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceofknowledgebeyondbooks.Aslongasyougainthedesiretoshouldertheresponsibilitytohelpothers,pleasecontactusat23708888.Itishightimethatwewelcomedabrighterfuture.
StudentUnion
June172006
分析:
共172个字,当然,可以进行适当删减到150个字以内,120字左右。
Areyouwillingtoparticipateinourvoluntaryprogram?
(问句开头,风险低,形式新颖)Inoursocietydominatedbytheincreasingemphasisonwelfare,voluntaryactivitiesperformtheextraordinarilyvitalfunctionfornotonlyindividualsintheirpersonallifebutalsothesocietyasawhole.Pleasetojoinusasavolunteer.
Thedetailsoftheactivityarelistedasfollows.(开始分层次,思路清晰)Inthefirstplace,thereisnodenyingthatthepracticalcapabilitymakeshumanbeingswhattheyaretoday,andourpracticewillexerttheexceedinglycrucialimpactonitsimprovement.Inthesecondplace,thearrangementmainly
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